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  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: A Blurred Soul

    hello

    Nov 18, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: long drive (part 2)

    Hello! Let me see if I can clean this work out of the green room and offer some helpful advice for you :-) I'm a bit rusty on reviewing so ...

    Nov 8, 2020

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: My Father's Ring (First Draft)

    I apologize in advance as my reviewing and writing skills are very rusty, as an oldie making a comeback. Hopefully, I can still offer some constructive advice :-) **disclaimer: I ...

    Nov 8, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 26.2)

    HERE WE ARE. HERE WE ARE. OH MY GOODNESS. I'M SO EXCITED. YAY. YAY. YAY

    Feb 8, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 26.1)

    here we are, THE LAST CHAPTER. (well, the first part of the last chapter) BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT. this is so exciting. It feels too soon to be ending ...

    Feb 8, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 25)

    second to last chapter, here I come :-) **disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative aspects more so than positive aspects when reviewing, and this is just to help ...

    Feb 8, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 24.2)

    Ready for more

    Feb 8, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 24.1)

    OKAY, I'm ready for more. Hopefully some more ANGST AND TROUBLE in this chapter bc that's my fave ;-) **disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative aspects more so ...

    Feb 7, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 23.2)

    back again :-) kinda tired though so we'll see how this review goes. **disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative aspects more so than positive aspects when reviewing, and ...

    Feb 7, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 23.1)

    hi hi hi I'm back. no way I only have seven more reviews until this is over???? maybe I'll go back to the beginning and do those as well xD ...

    Feb 7, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 22.2)

    Hello, here I am again :-) I feel good being productive about reviewing again, so I'm gonna try and keep it going! **disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative ...

    Feb 6, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 22.1)

    hello hello, back for another one

    Feb 5, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 21.2)

    Hello, back again to throw myself into this world of pirates and princesses

    Feb 5, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 21.1)

    I couldn't wait, so HERE I AM AGAIN. **disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative aspects more so than positive aspects when reviewing, and this is just to help ...

    Feb 4, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 20.2)

    back again, so so excited to read on! (also tryna hide from my depression for a while...haha.) **disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative aspects more so than positive ...

    Feb 4, 2019


I can't understand why people are frightened by new ideas. I'm frightened of old ones.
— John Cage