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  • blondeshorty01
    Jun 12, 2011

    Hi! :) Thanks for the review!! And yes, you were really close on your guess. Yay for you, here have a cookie! *gives cookie* Welcome to yws! and thanks for the review... it helped a bunch!!! If you don't mind too much...i haven't gotten too many reviews for my old poem "Fireworks" it's kind of a love poem again XD anyways...THANKS!!!


  • MUCHO
    Jun 10, 2011

    Hey man, and/or woman, ...I liked your poem ....about suffocating, it was really inventive...all right cut the crap, I scratch your back, you scratch mine...JUST KIDDING. :) But welcome, I am the first comment, I am following you, and please take a look at this for me...

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    cjscoot Haha thanks...I took a look at it, I'll reply later. Just got back from a swim meet :) But thanks for commenting, I realized my profile looked a bit empty and spruced it up a little.
    Jun 11, 2011



worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton