Young Writers Society

hey hey! it's tea here to review your wonderful poem! firstly (things I like): the line: shebecameagirlwhospokequietlyandmumbledallherwordsintoonelongsentence. was very impactful. when I read this, I

review time! Firstly:(things i liked) I love the line "A curtain of damp mist veils the city" It's as if someone put a blanket of water over the city. I ...

YAYAYAY!! I LOVE THIS POEM!! ITS SO HEARTFELT AND ADORABLE! and now time to actually review. ONE: THINGS I LIKED The "we are" section personifying the dandelion, clouds, and flames ...

HEY HEY!!! review time ONE: THINGS I LIKED I REMEMBER THIS!!! IT SMELLED REALLY BAD!!! ither than that. I like the part "What was the real/color of the trees/smell of ...

WOAH... INSANE??? FIRSTLY: THINGS I LIKED OKAY, LETS GET DOWN TO BUISNESS. The opening of "tears flow, torrents cascading from my soul" made me envision someone floating through water like ...

review tiem!! :D FIRSTLY: THINGS I LIKED The way this touches on how the world is so caught up in clickbait and fake news is really touching, and thats something ...

review time ^-^ ONE: THINGS I LIKED Beginning each stanza with I am creates a very distinct rhythm and feel to the poem, and helps make it come together nicely. ...

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Very informitave, helped me commit wire fraud to pay for my loans that i owe my loan sharks I would rate this 10/10. I love making money, and money loves ...

I love this work !! (REVIEW TIME!!!!) (●'◡'●) FIRSTLY, This work is very grim, and pulled out a feeling i never have felt?? It's really impactful. I Love this. Secondly, ...

review time o((>ω< ))o FIRSTLY: OH MY GOD. THIS IS AMAZING. I CANNOT EXPRESS MORE FEELINGS. Secondly: I love the usage of the names of the moon in different languages, ...

Back again, reviewing because I didn't lengthen my original comment enough for it to count as a review. As I said, I really liked the flow of this work. The ...