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Hi Kaavyak - I enjoyed reading your poem and would love to know if it's written with a particular case / law in mind to better understand what's being said. ...

Wow! I was definitely not expecting this to go from bombs to embroidery - but I kind of liked the reveal that the characters were sitting and embroidering something together. ...

I was reading through your classic when I saw this piece called "FREAKY SPAGHETTI" on the sidebar and thought I better give it a read. xD I am NOT disappointed ...

Hi there, hope you're having a great day! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know So this poem is super sweet - ...

Hi century, I am so very sorry for your loss - pets take up a special place in our hearts and lives if we let them, and it sounds like ...

Hey Kaymal! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! It's a great place for a writer to land and I hope you find it to be encouraging and instructive - I ...

This is so incredibly sweet and sentimental and I am very sure Lily will appreciate it once she's old enough to read it! I once found a card that my ...

Hi @candyhearts - and welcome to Young Writers Society! I hope you enjoy it here - we've got a great community of writers and especially poets! :) Oh this is ...

This was certainly a complicated poem emotionally to unpack! So I have always interpreted this story in the Bible as David was the powerful one (literally the king) and that ...

Hi redcarnation! Happy Review Month ! In honor of the occasion I'm here with a review. Your poem is fairly short, so I'll just go stanza by stanza! :) stanza ...

Hey @Tambo - a late welcome to YWS, hope you're enjoying the site! Are you still working on this story? I'm curious where this is going to go as it ...

Hi @melaniemarfe20 welcome to YWS! Congratulations on posting your first story here! A few notes on format - You may find on YWS, since primarily the site operates in English, ...

Oh I really enjoyed this short story vampricone - it has a very clear background, build, tension, then conclusion. To me, something that made this story particularaly special was the ...

Hi Damian, welcome to YWS - hope you are enjoying the site so far! Here to review your story! Dialect I think the last time I read story with this ...

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This work inspires me to sing a song. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I (do I) A full commitment's what I'm thinking of ...