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Thanks for taking the time to read it

ahaha it's you ;)

This is such a beautiful poem and it really spoke to me. The grammar and layout of your poem is awesome and i don't really have anything to criticize except ...

This poem is so beautiful. The grammar and structure of your poem is presented in a very nice manner and there is not much i can criticize you on except, ...

This poem is so beautiful. The grammar and structure of your poem is presented in a very nice manner and there is not much i can criticize you on except, ...

Thanks so much :)

Thanks :)

I've changes the "love is a mystery, he cannot bear to solve" to ''But i know of his falsehood''

I've changed the "love is a mystery, he cannot bear to solve" to ''But i know of his falsehood

Thanks you

Thanks for the review, i'll try improve it soon