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Re: El Camino A Casa
Leja, can you tranlate this for me. I really want to read it.
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: El Camino A Casa
Translation please.
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Nothing's Fair in Teen Love and War (chapter 3)
You got me addicited to this story. Keep on writing. I'm listing to Finally by Fergie and it matches Alicia feelings after the kiss. I somewhat agree with Fall_Into_The _Sky's ...
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Re: Favorite TV Shows
Gilmore Girls Ugly Betty Lincoln Heights Grey's Anatomy American Idol Project Runway
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Re: Check out this Quote
C'mon. Tell me what you think :(.
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Need help deciding on a collage major
Hey ,when you are 13 it kinda of a good idea to think of a major because you have to strive for AP classes to get into a good college, ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Poem::: Lyrical::: I Am Intoxicated
Welcome to the YWS!!!!!!! This poem has a ton of potential, just put in more details and this could be an awesome poem. I love romantic stuff. How did he ...
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Re: Mystic Satisfaction
Welcome to the YWS!!!!!! There is passion and fire in this poem. It innocenlty uninnocent. I like this poem. You might want to space everything out into stanzas. Overall this ...
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Re: Mathew, please don't leave me
One word: Beautiful
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Lullaby
This poem had a stream of wonder running though me. I loved it. There was beautiful emotion in it that brought me back to last year when I swore I ...
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Re: Sixteen
I like the growing apart feel of it. It a good comming of age poem.
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Limerick I
That was great. It rhymed and it was humorous. Those two things go great unlike water and a light switch. And I like the sarcastic humor at the end. Sarcasm ...
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Re: My Undying Search
I also like the sand castle analogy. This was a really good poem and the vocabulary even better. I loved the message too. It's true!! Just live life and be ...
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Re: Bag of Green Grapes
This was so cute!! This just made me laugh. You write the funniest poems, ever!!!! Keep on writing.
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Re: Deleted
This poem ended pretty abruptly, but it that what happpens when people die from drugs and/or suiside? This was a good poem. Its kinda an eye opener for the ignorant ...
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