aestar101

I need a couple more people to critique on The Reason. Its in Other Fiction.

Where I live it either melts until spring or more snow comes :shock:

I loved it!!! You could expand more because you have really good thoughts comming though. We need to see more of them.

Waking up is a part of my pain, The world is on my shoulders, It’s you me and complete disdain, How could you let this go this far, It’s broke ...

I just loved the words. All the poems I read here somehow touch my heart. It just jumps out at me. Not much rythmn, but the feeling is there.

That was lovely, awesome, spetactular....... I'm such a sucker for romance!!! Lover the rythmn and th imagery. That just... WOW... blew me away. Keep writing :D :D :D :D

YEAH, BREAK DOWN THE WALLS OF CONVENTION WITH INDIVIDUALISM!!!!!!

This was funny. Sweet... sweet, revenge!!!! :D :D :D

Reading your poems is like I'm put in a romance novel (not a sappy one). It almost like a religous experience. You have serious talent. Keep on writing. Again seperate ...

Welcome to the YWS!!! Before you hear this from anyone else you might as well hear it from me. We recommend that there is a 2:1 review to literary additons ...

I stand there, On the dance floor, I pout my red lips and flutter my mascara drenched eyes softly, Looking around the room, For someone, I’m done with the wannabes ...

This was great! The plot is somthing to figure out!!! Keep on going. :) :)

Thank you! Before I was worried about posting my work.

C'mon I really want to help :(

Yes you are right, Gladius. I don't think someone's religion makes someone a terrorist.