WillowPaw1

Hey there! WillowPaw1 here to review your work! Nitpicks you will receive the call, for when you will die. I really think that comma is unnessacary. It just creates a ...

Hey dogs! Okay, I have a couple nitpicks. The soldiers were out their fighting for our lives, Their should be there. "Their" is possessive, like "that's their backpack". There is ...

Hi, Em101cats. Wow, this is one of those poems that really had me thinking. Like, really. And wit your question at the end, it seemed to sum it all up, ...

Hi there! WillowPaw1 here to review your work! Well... This was... Interesting. It was different. I have a couple nitpicks for you, though. I look at he and get up ...

Hey again! WillowPaw1 here to review! I have to agree with Raven on this: you have just improved so much for chapter for to this chapter. The descriptions were much ...

Hello there! :) He will save you, give you relief, and all you have to do is believe. Maybe it's.just because I'm tired, but I don't think "believe" and "relief" ...

Hi puppys! Me again! :D They were horrified by the sits they saw I think you meant sites, not sits. All the killing, and hatred toward America. Comma is unnessacary. ...

Hey ! WillowPaw here to review your poem. This whole thing is so true! About how people don't understand reading and writing ad imagination. I feel exactly the same way. ...

Hi there! Overall - I thought this poem was great. I'm going to put a little more emphasis on what moment said, though, and that's using metaphors. Metaphors sound amazing ...

Hello there, Aris! Here is a quick review for you. What needs Improvement - First off, the ryhme scheme seems a little all over the place. I suggest making it ...

Hi there! This is really interesting — I especially love how you incorporated YWS in here and made it a fan fic. There were places where it seemed like there ...

Hi there... Here is a short review for you! ^_^ I seriously found nothing wrong with this, but I accept a lot of work that is worked on well. The ...

Hi there! First off: nitpicks. to watch the bubbles scream, watch the fish in it's It's should be its. What you are using now is it is, and you don't ...

I love how sweet and gentle and flowing this poem is. Plus, it's for Mothers' Day, which is an extra bonus! These are all suggestions, so feel free to ignore ...

This is going to be a short review for your short poem. What I have to say: Interesting. I really wasn't expecting this. The title drew me in, and before ...