WillowPaw1

I'm not really sure how to review this, and I'm pretty sure this should be posted somewhere else... Anyways... Name: Hailey Last name? Type of hairstyle: Straight, but she sometimes ...

Hi there, happy review day... All right. So I haven't read the previous chapters but I'll do my best. I didn't find any nitpicks, so this is going to be ...

Hi! Happy Review Day! Awh, such a good ending. I guess. 0.o Anyways, onto the review. Nitpicks She’d always thought it was just in movies that in rained in funerals ...

Hi again! Maybe we’ll have cute little baby’s with green-silver eyes and ink-black hair. Baby's should be babies. Zontafer got pretty much all the nitpicks, so that gives me a ...

I'm here! I reviewed your past two chapters and totally did not see these. Oh well, on to the review! Nitpicks I'll try not to repeat anything other people wrote. ...

Hi there! I'm not going to point out nitpicks. You should be able to find them on your own by now. Anyways... So... They eat berries. They're gonna die if ...

Mmkay, back again... "Where is Sarah and my other friends?" Grace asked confused. "I don't know honey." Her mother said. "You don't understand mom. They have been gone for weeks ...

Back again! This review is ganna get me my fourth star! “So,” I said, trying to start small talk, “ is it true that werewolves are bitten.” 1) Take away ...

Hi again! Nitpicks It began to surround me. my fiery spell subsided. My needs to be capitalized (or you could make it two sentences, and then you would need to ...

Hi! WillowPaw1 here to review your poem. ;) Well, first - welcome to YWS! Okay - so yeah - metaphors and similes in a poem: the best. Not joking. Especially ...

Hi, WillowPaw here to review. This is ganna be a short review for your short poem. ;) Speaking of short, wow! You got a lot in here with just... *counts* ...

Hi, back again! Nitpicks Every corner, every crevice, was viewed by my golden eyes, 1) I think you should change this to: Every corner and every crevice 2) take the ...

Hi there! Here we go with the review! Nitpicks It starts with a soft, incessant drops of tears secreting from my eyes. I'm pretty sure "a" should be "the", because ...

All right, pretty sure this isn't a draft anymore. :P Nitpicks I spent my first Easter at my great-grandmas house. Great-grandma is possessive (it's her house) so you need an ...

Hey there - WillowPaw1 here to review your magnificent poem! :) This is ganna be a short review... Wow - so yeah - amazingness! (If that's even a word). I ...