WillowPaw1

Hey Em101Cats! I think Weymouth mentioned this, but good job on adding a twist to your topic. I agree—most poems are about cutting, suicide, murder, or just plain old depressing ...

Hello there! WillowPaw1 to review! This was really good, there were some points though where I kind of blanked out. That was the only big situation I had with actually ...

Hello! Okay, the whole time I was reading this I heard the tune "Let it Go" in my head just because I saw those words. c: I'm not all good ...

Hello Em101! Mkay, as usual I am here to review! Ignore any typos cause I'm on my kindle fire... ANYWAYS I found one nitpick, and here I am to show ...

Hey! WillowPaw1 to review! Okay, I think this was mentioned by other reviewers but I'll say it anyways ;) You should really break the paragraphs up, they're very chunky and ...

I understand this poem completely and truly... because yes, I have freckles. :( Your description about them in the first part felt alive. I don't know if you actually have ...

Interesting, I must say. This was very interesting! :) I love this! I'm a little confused, but still. This Number 2478 android person thing (I have no clue, :P) seemed ...

Wow. Okay, wow. THIS WAS AMAZING! *wipes tears from face* I'm not really crying, but yeah, this was kinda emotional. You turned a simple subject into a fantastic poem. Rhyming! ...

:O Oh my glob!! This sort of reminds me of Mrs. Frisby and the Rats of NIHM (I totally didn't do that right), because they're being captured, and if they ...

Hello there!! I'm here to review your poetry! ^.^ Okay, first off, let's start with the punctuation/capitalization. I don't know if it is your writing style (for some it is, ...

Heyo! Here I am to review your poem! ^-^ Wow, okay, wow. This was spectacular. What I loved about it? The word choice, and the rhymes that almost seemed hidden ...

Hello dere :3 Willow here to review your work. Let's start with the good stuff, shall we? Mkay. Mentioned by Iggy and RoyalHighness, the last two lines were amazing! They ...

I already welcomed you... But ANYWAYS... Welcome to YWS!!!! Yayy new member! *hugs* Okay, this was amazing. I love it. @RoyalHighness already mentioned what I found... And I didn't spot ...

Okay, most little nitpicks were spotted, but I found this one: A itsy bitsy piece of Rease says that she was the main reason for the split up. "A" should ...

This was kind of funny (it's supposed to be, right?) But in a good poetry way. I love the rhyming in this. Even though there's some... hmm, slang words, I ...