WillowPaw1

Hello! Willow here to review as requesed. Lucrezia mentioned most of the nitpicks, and I'll say the one I found. (Even if he already pointed them out. Oh well. :P) ...

Aw, I loved this! You mentioned this was like your first not-horror story or something, right? It's a good one, especially if you're used to writing scary or sad stories. ...

I knew there was something strange about this kid! This ending really surprised me. When I was reading through this, I kept thinking, he can't be invisible... Not for real... ...

Hey Raven! I'm going to be writing a short review for you. :) Okay, first of all, this poem is more of sentences broken up and placed on different lines. ...

Hello! WillowPaw1 here to review. I read the description and I see you have edited this, no? There are still many errors in here. Let's take a little chunk out ...

Hey there. Welcome to YWS. Let's get started. First of all, I really liked this poem. It has the truth in here, it really does. I can relate to this ...

0.0 Wow. 0.0 Wow. Great. Okay, Willow here for a review. Let's get started. First of all, you were in third person then changed to first person once or twice. ...

Hey Sunset! Again — nice poem. And I like your topic, too, it's very unique. :) Edits: I feel so fizzy. I know you were trying to rhyme fizzy with ...

Hey Sunset! This was a very cute little poem! At first when I read this, I thought, dude, pandas can really hurt you! but then, what do you know! You ...

Hey Alceste! WillowPaw1 here! Okay—let's get this straight. This is amazing! I really like the humor in here and your topic is one of a kind. :) I've never read ...

Hello there!! :) Nitpicks first... . I was texting him with slowly dragging my blade across my wrist, I think you meant "while" not "with". I start to push myself ...

Hello Secrete! Okay, wow... This was great! I lived it! Not joking! :D If your curse word was "damn" then I think you spelled it wrong. I'm not completely sure, ...

Hey shining star! Willow here to review your poetry! ;) Okay, everything in red is what I put in—or your mistakes. Here we go! This place is full of worries ...

Hello! Okay, this has a spark of humor to it—I like it. And the way the kids and Emily and her brother speak to each other seem pretty realistic. You ...

Hey Raven! WillowPaw1 here to review your chapter. Nitpicks: She could never hear one of her dad’s jokes, or watch movie’s with him. Movies doesn't need an apostrophe after it. ...