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    Abid155
    Oct 2, 2011

    Thanks For The Review, I Appreciate It.
    My last stanza is a little complicated because the whole thing is a strange metaphor

    Its about a computer and life itself
    e.g Windows As In a window/windows laptop
    History as in web history/ and the history i had with the person.

  • I forgot to thank you for the review on Mismatch. Interesting point you make there. :)


    Vettan I try my best :)
    Oct 1, 2011


  • qaralynn
    Sep 29, 2011

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
    sorry for the late wishes OO *drowns Vett in white chocolate and sprite to make him forget*


    Vettan Go chocolate! Thanks
    Sep 29, 2011


    qaralynn loool wow you are way too easy man! XD
    *throws some more choco*

    Sep 29, 2011


  • Vettan
    Sep 29, 2011

    Thank you all :)


  • GeeLyria
    Sep 29, 2011

    Thanks for following, boy! ^_^


    Vettan That you for thank youing! :)
    Sep 29, 2011


  • Kaedee
    Sep 29, 2011

    Happy birthday! c:


  • Skorpionne
    Sep 28, 2011

    Image


    Vettan Awesome cake!!!
    Sep 29, 2011


  • carbonCore
    Sep 28, 2011

    Happy b-day! Old person! :p

  • I wish you a happy 21st.


  • borntoshop
    Sep 25, 2011

    Thanks for the review on my photos! (:


  • Twinkle4ever
    Sep 24, 2011

    Thanx for the review on my sakura! And the forehead, nose and eyes. Everything's the same as the original picture. I should've posted the real one with it so people can compare. Sorry about that. :)


  • silented1
    Sep 22, 2011

    Loved the review, honestly, if you stick around, I might stick around too. I could ruin / selfishly justify certain parts of your review but I'd like to keep it valid. Just know you thought of the poem in many correct ways. I was honestly impressed, thank you.


  • Matthews
    Jun 11, 2011

    You're welcome! :P


  • Yuriiko
    Jun 9, 2011

    Thank you for the review! Yes, I think the story needs to convey the theme clearer, because I wanted the story to be set in a time where Blacks were discriminated during 1960's. But the story though, is in no way to start any conflict to the readers. I wanted it to be in a perspective of a child, so everything would turn out to be innocent, plot wise. ^^

    Thanks again. :)


  • eyesxsewnxopen
    Jun 8, 2011

    Welcome Please check out the bunny adaption agency in the club area!



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