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WillowCutz Ouch! Bet that's hurts. I couldn't say how badly though my worst injuries have been cuts and bruises. I'm really lucky aren't I? Well, get better. And next time have a sibling at the bottom to fall on.
Jun 12, 2013
Twinkle4ever lol, sure thing!
Jun 12, 2013
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Twinkle4ever oh sorry, my mistake again. thanks for telling but that doesn't change the fact that it's still a good cliffhanger.
Jun 9, 2013
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Infinitron Scary!!!
Jun 9, 2013
Infinitron I hope this thing won't come in my nightmares
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hey there my next chapter is out, please have a look at it when you have time. Also please excuse the format that it is in. work.php?id=101978
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Twinkle4ever the doors open. Please wipe your feet on the mat first and don't forget to do the entrance ritual, clap three times then twirl and then flap your way to the kitchen....umm then make me a sandwich. Yeah, I'd love that thanks. =P
Jun 5, 2013
Infinitron Here's your sandwich, mademoiselle twinkle. Would you like some coffee?
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hey there, if you read the second line of the sixth paragraph, you will see that his vision came back to normal. But thanks for saying that though, it just let me know that i was not specific enough with the part where his vision was restored. Thanks for your review. I will let you know when i post the next chapter
Twinkle4ever Sure thing.
May 31, 2013
mystogan also with the age thing, I think you would write it as a word, like twenty-two, it's just not part of the convention to write numbers when writing novels. The only exception where the laws of english can be broken is if it is part of a dialogue, but even then I think people write in words. I am pretty sure I have never read a professional novel with numbers for age before, but this is just my opinion tbf
hope this helped
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Here is a question that's been nagging me for a while. Since I haven't mentioned a number or age in my novels for a while, I'm not sure if I should say 22 or twenty two. Which one fits a novel, the age in numeric or text?
FlowerPower Text
May 30, 2013
elysian 22
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Hey here is chapter 2 of Operation 16. I know you had questions from the last chapter, hopefully some of then have been answered because there are a few more waiting with this chapter. Please take a look at it when you have time. work.php?id=101833
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Twinkle4ever Heya. what's up?
May 27, 2013
rwgbookwriter Nothing much WBU????
May 27, 2013
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Hope you forgive me for my mistake
I know i'm a fool, but i'm your friend
- Love, hobbit
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ChocoCookie Aw.
May 12, 2013
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Infinitron Aww. Poor keyboard
May 10, 2013
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*hugs*
You are really helping me to take a load off my chest.
Thanks so much
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Jun 12, 2013