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  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic
    Re: American Citizen.

    Yo Sis, I am here to review. Try to not act too surprised. :P I think the main reason people aren't reacting too well to this essay, is because they ...

    Sep 6, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Black Fire - Chapter 2

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! I'm so sorry I took so long to get this review done. I'm afraid I'm a bit rusty when it comes to reviewing right ...

    Jun 14, 2015

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: Ideal illusion

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! I'm so sorry for being so late in getting this review done. But now I am here, so hopefully everything is okay. It also ...

    Jun 13, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: An Oncoming Squall

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! I'm sorry if this review does come off as a bit confusing. I haven't reviewed in a while, and my skills may be a ...

    Apr 26, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Children Of Shadows Chapter 2 Control

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! I think I like this chapter even more than the first one! The main reason for that is because it had less dialogue and ...

    Mar 22, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Children Of Shadows Chapter 1 The Birth Of Magic

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! Sorry, for taking longer than I thought. Here goes. Firstly, let's talk about your opening sentence. The story takes place in a world much ...

    Mar 22, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: The Battle Chapter 12-13

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! Ah, yes. Good to see some more of this. So I can see that in this chapter she's starting off her first year in ...

    Mar 22, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Twin Blades chapter one

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! I saw your title and I just had to leave a review on this. Firstly, I would suggest taking a look at your opening ...

    Mar 15, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Black Fire - Chapter 1

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! Ah, so that's the reason why the guy in the classroom was so restless? His best friend was outside the school, if I have ...

    Mar 15, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Black Fire - Prologue

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! Thanks for tagging me. Like I promised, I am here on Saturday to review. Looking at this, I really am sorry that this hasn't ...

    Mar 15, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Misery or Humanity Chapters 13 & 14

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! For starters, shouldn't Blane be a bit more suspicious of this guy? This man just walks in and starts talking about these rebellion ideas, ...

    Mar 8, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 6

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! So basically, I have one problem with this chapter. Granted, this isn't exactly a prologue or first chapter, but it is the beginnings to ...

    Mar 8, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 5

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! Firstly, I love how you started off this chapter. You gave us a great visual that put up the setting well. Not only did ...

    Mar 8, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 4

    Hi! Cricket here for a review! Good to see two new chapters posted. I'll get to both today, if possible. That young mouse didn’t do any of that.” Having two ...

    Mar 8, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 3

    Heeey there. Cricket here for another review on this novel. :) Thanks for PM'ing me and alerting me to this. I won't be online during the week (not reviewing at ...

    Mar 1, 2015


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