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Hi Otterpop, I'm back for another review! ^-^ Overall, this was an exciting chapter, and it was neat to learn more about the interactions between shadows and spirits. So, without ...

Hey Otterpop, I'm back for another review! ^-^ So, getting right to it... Blake unwrapped a small rollup of ivory-colored gauze... It seems like Blake is good at taking care ...

Hiya Otterpop, another review here! ^^ This was a great chapter as usual, with a nice mix of dialogue/interaction with Blake's friends and action. It did have a lot of ...

Hi Otterpop, mint here with a review! C: I really liked how everything's building up here, with Blake's discoveries about the scythe and housecat-shadows, and the strange illness that's going ...

Hiya Otterpop!! ^-^ Apologies, I haven't been too active in terms of reviewing lately, but hopefully I'll be able to change that through LRS ( Last Reviewer Standing )! I'm ...

Hiya Yoshi!! It's been a while-- hope everything's going well for you! ^^ I'm here for a review, so let's get started C: First off, I appreciated how this chapter ...

Hiya, mint here for a review! ^-^ This chapter felt a lot like the calm before a storm, with the absence of any shadow figures and yet still a sense ...

Ah hi again; sorry I didn't review this earlier! ^^' I should probably start checking the Green Room more often >.> Or, if you don't mind, it'd be wonderful if ...

Hiya, mint back with a review!! ^-^ So you've definitely left us on a cliffhanger here... Personally I agreed with Noriko's first opinion that they should stay in the temple ...

Oh my gosh, this was just amazing =O I don't usually read horror, me being the scaredy-cat I am xD, but this was written so smoothly and intriguingly that I ...

Hiya, mint back for another review! ^-^ First off, I wanted to say that I appreciate how the chapters are each so organized, with distinct settings and events-- it makes ...

Hiya, mint here with a review! I've been enjoying this so far, and honestly it reads a lot like an already-published novel C: We've got this protagonist who can see ...

Hiya, mint here with a review! ^-^ I've been enjoying reading along as you post these chapters, but I figured I'd start reviewing them as well~ so yeah, let's get ...

Hi Harry! Whoo, so I've made it to the end of chapter 9... and it appears that you've left us on quite a cliffhanger here-- I'm definitely looking forward to ...

Oooh they're really getting into the riddle solving now!! As usual, it was super fun to read the dialogue between these characters, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens ...