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Hi again! Looks like we have a POV switch to Devlin now. I personally found this chapter more intriguing than the previous one, although I still don't have a clear ...

Hey Messy! I'm (finally) here with a review! xD I've read the first few chapters of Williwaw , so I have a vague sense of who Devlin and Carris are. ...

Hello hello! I'm here with a review, as promised! ^-^ Okay, so I read through the previous chapters, and my main reaction is-- argh! Why'd they keep the First Spell ...

Hey there! It's mint, here with a quick review as a Knight of the Afterwatch! ^^ I usually don't have trouble with going to the dentist, but I know it's ...

Hey again! This chapter seems just as action-packed as any scene with Sarah was. I'm assuming this is all still in the past, so I'm wondering how the pack dealt ...

Heyy, it's mint, back with a review! ^-^ So, for overall comments: I'm glad to see Izzy getting revenge, although I hope she'll be able to find peace afterwards. The ...

Hiya, it's mint, here with a review! ^-^ Looks like the focus of this chapter is really on Izzy! It's nice to get to know her better, but I do ...

Hiya, it's mint here with a quick review! ^-^ This chapter seemed like a bit of a breather, and I liked that we got to see some more interaction between ...

Hey hey! It's mint, back with a review! I can't think of any overall comments right now, so I'll just jump right into specifics. c: After they had walked over ...

Hiya! It's mint, here with a quick review. It was nice to get to see more of Mireya and Cyrin's relationship in this chapter, and despite all their little jabs ...

Hey Ari! mint here, with a review! :] While I'm still very concerned about Cyprus's injury, I'm glad they were able to reunite with Jepret, at least... I'm not too ...

Heyo! I'm here to help clear out the Green Room... again... xD Jk, I'm not complaining about you posting more chapters ;) There was definitely a lot of tension in ...

Ooh the tension in this chapter! It was also coupled with anticipation at finally clearing out the Green Room, haha (Only 6 reviews left-- exciting!) =PP Anyways, as you may ...

Hey Silv! ^-^ Back for the last part of chapter 17! So it looks like there're more complications cropping up, of course... But what I'm mostly worried about is what ...

Hey Silv, I'm back! :D And oooh dear, this chapter had me on the edge of my chair with nervousness... I'm still trying and failing to think of ways they ...