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  • Other » Realistic, Other
    Re: Simple conversations in spanish

    Hi NumberG, and welcome to YWS! :D First off, YWS is typically a good place to post stories, scripts, essays, and poetry. That's what our members are used to reviewing. ...

    May 27, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure
    Re: Chapter Four: Portal 1.1

    Hi hi Lady! It's mint, here to leave a quick review. :> So, overall thoughts first: the plot and pacing of your story are excellent! And who doesn't enjoy a ...

    May 27, 2024

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Bus Ride

    Hello, Lim!! I'm here to review this lovely poem for you, using a review template made by PKMichelle ! :D Hello, friend!! This review is brought to you by review ...

    Mar 2, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Daughter of War - Chapter 13: The Third Trial

    Hello, friend!! This review is brought to you by review team Potato! Get ready... Get set... Keep Your Eyes Peeled - My Reactions The one thing that Josephine kept thinking ...

    Mar 2, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 12: Temptation

    Hello, friend!! This review is brought to you by review team Potato! Get ready... Get set... Keep Your Eyes Peeled - My Reactions Alright, I'll be changing things up a ...

    Mar 2, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 11: The Girl Who Breathed Fire

    Hello, friend!! This review is brought to you by review team Potato! (Credit for the review template to PKMichelle ) Get ready... Get set... Keep Your Eyes Peeled - My ...

    Mar 1, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure
    Re: Diamonds in the Rough 💎 2: The Cave

    Hey Amaya! I'm here with a review, as promised ^-^ Overall, I think the way you write your characters is very strong. Carla seems like a clever, skilled protagonist, and ...

    Feb 15, 2024

  • Poetry » Other, Narrative
    Re: Lonely

    Hey BlackMagician!! I hope you're enjoying YWS so far. ^-^ I found this to be a really interesting poem; I love that it covers the theme of loneliness, which I ...

    Feb 11, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 5: The Tavern of Zeus

    Hi Ley!! I am (finally) here with a review, as promised. :] So one thing that stood out to me are your descriptions: they're absolutely lovely, and I could really ...

    Feb 11, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: ​8. Blood and Truce

    Hello hello! It's mint, back with a review! ^-^ Overall, I enjoyed seeing the other hunters' reactions to the werewolves (well, not enjoyed exactly, but it made sense as part ...

    Jan 17, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Act Two: envelopes envelop my eyes

    Hello herbbb! It's mint, here with a review ^-^ I'm going to try adapting my usual prose-reviewing style for this. xD So, first off, some overall thoughts! I love how ...

    Jan 15, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: 7. Rocky and cold as ice

    Hiya! It's mint, here with a review! ^-^ I'm proud of Sarah's growth-- she was so confident while fighting that deserter, and it looks like she's really gained control over ...

    Jan 9, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: Fate Undone- Prolouge

    Hey tea! It's mint, here with a review. :3 I'm super excited to read this novel! I'm wondering what the phrases in the chapter names mean, but I suppose we'll ...

    Dec 31, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: She Was A Child

    Hey Ellie! mint here with a quick review. ^-^ Overall, this was a powerful poem. The narrator breaks free of her abusive family situation at the end of the poem, ...

    Dec 30, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: Chapter 5 part 2 of 2

    mint again, here with another review! ^-^ It was nice to learn more about James, his background, his values, and his personality in this chapter. I also enjoy meeting new ...

    Dec 30, 2023


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