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Hello tgham99! Suggestions endlessly, / ceaselessly, First I would suggest putting these lines together. The break between them feels almost unnecessary to me and interrupts the good flow of the ...
Feb 21, 2020
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Hello! SBG here with your review! Suggestions My first suggestion is to watch the length of your lines. The flow of your poem is generally good, but having lines that ...
Dec 19, 2019
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Hello brookeallo! First I want to say wonderful job. This poem is quite simply amazing and it is a wake up call to everyone. You portrayed this very well. Suggestions ...
Dec 13, 2019
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Hello Bhaavya Singh! I do not wish to be critical, and all of my suggestions are with the best intentions! Suggestions A dream,that was in your heart so far. This ...
Dec 9, 2019
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Hello Horisun! I will be reviewing you poem, and before I begin I just want you to know that I am not trying to be harsh nor critical, I just ...
Dec 9, 2019
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Hello Anamel! I am here to help, not hurt, so I hope I am not too critical. You can take my suggestions or not, I just hope this is helpful. ...
Dec 6, 2019
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Hello StudentAH! Just know that I never mean to be rude or critical, and you can take my suggestions or you can't! I am in this to help you! Suggestions ...
Dec 6, 2019
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Hello Hereticteen! I am not trying to be rude or "picky" in my reviews, but I am only trying to help you out and suggest things to help out your ...
Dec 6, 2019
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Hello LittleLee! I am here to return the favor as promised, I am taking a different approach to this review, but essentially I will critique the chapter in sections, and ...
Dec 5, 2019
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Hello Gem!! Suggestions My First suggestion would to be to combined some of your lines. It feels very fragmented and choppy. How do you act so stupid. This is a ...
Dec 2, 2019
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Hello Bellarke! Suggestions. I like how you kept the AABB rhyme scheme, but some lines feel like they were forced or they just don't flow as well. It is really ...
Nov 26, 2019
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Hello! Suggestions The first thing I recognize is the difference in the length of your lines, I am not sure if it is a style thing meant for impact, or ...
Nov 15, 2019
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Hello MiniGem! Initial Thoughts I really like the formatting of the italicized and bolded words which made it really nice to know which ones to stress and portrayed the emotion ...
Nov 14, 2019
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Hello Jaybird! walking over autumn leaves in forgotten forests in search of the monsters underneath suburban beds. just the wilderness, two brothers and a notebook messy with the notes of ...
Nov 14, 2019
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Hello Nymeria! Your imagery is absolutely fantastic I must say. This story was really nice to hear, and I love that you used the real God of War with the ...
Nov 14, 2019
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