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  • OKAY SO. I fed in some of my writing to Bing Bot to see if it would review it. AND ITS RESPONSE WAS HYSTERICAL.

    Spoiler! :
    Your story is intriguing! It’s a tale of immortality, bloodlust, and revenge. To answer your question, there are many ways to prepare to meet a Conqueror, depending on the context and the Conqueror’s personality. Here are some general tips that might help:

    1. Research the Conqueror: Learn as much as you can about the Conqueror’s history, personality, and motivations. This will help you understand what to expect and how to interact with them.

    2. Be respectful: Conquerors are often powerful and influential people, so it’s important to show them respect and deference. Avoid being confrontational or aggressive, as this could provoke them.

    3. Be prepared for the unexpected: Conquerors are known for their unpredictability, so it’s important to be flexible and adaptable. Be ready to change your plans or approach if necessary.

    4. Bring a gift: Depending on the situation, it might be appropriate to bring a gift as a sign of respect or goodwill. Make sure the gift is appropriate and not too extravagant.

    5. Stay calm and composed: Meeting a Conqueror can be intimidating, but it’s important to stay calm and composed. Avoid showing fear or nervousness, as this could be seen as a sign of weakness.

    These are just a few general tips, but they should give you a good starting point. If you have any specific questions or concerns, feel free to ask!


    (Though... uh... maybe gift giving is a bad idea. Just a thought! XD)

  • ...I use AI to make fan art for my story because I can't do it myself. *cries*

    ANYWAY. Book 1 art!

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    I kind of love how Cyrus's clothes don't actually fit carefully, lol. They sort of hang off of him awkwardly, which is TRUE because in the story he had lost a lot of weight and so it makes sense that his clothes would hang off awkwardly.

    Not a huge fan of Solea's clothes... she looks like she's wearing a nightgown. I put in better terms later that have more accurate clothes for Solea, but the expressions here are just... perfect.

    OH. I like the cloak a lot, lol. Does this not look like an old cloak???


  • Spearmint that mug is so cute O.O
    19 hours ago

  • Ahhhh why is this scene so difficult to write??? There are so many EMOTIONS and movement and... like, how am I supposed to write this scene???

    IcyFlame ahhh feelings
    Dec 7, 2023

  • Oh goodness. I'm going to have to split this chapter, aren't I? >.>

    New outline...


  • Rereading the last chapter of Book 1 so I can write my last chapter for Book 4 and AHHHH THE FEELS. ;,;

    Snoink Also, there is a LOT that happens in that last chapter for Book 1, but the thing that has me fuming the most is the first line where Cyrus is described as smiling with cake crumbs on his front, and I AM SO MAD.
    Dec 3, 2023

    AilahEvelynMae ahhhh amazing!!! I love your avatar too :D Happy Sunday!!
    Dec 3, 2023

  • I changed my avvie to @Spearmint's holiday avatar that she made me last year. :) If you want one, then hop on over here!
    Spearmint wrote:looking for a holiday avvie? well... Draw Me a Holiday Avatar 2023 is open for business! get a custom-drawn holiday avvie for free! ;D

    and when you've got one, don't forget to post it in A Big YWS Family Picture To Remember 2023! to be a part of the YWS family picture!

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    Spearmint aww :3 thanks for the repost! honestly, i think that pig is one of the best animals i've ever drawn xD
    Dec 1, 2023


    Omg, but the last couple thousand is just utter drivel. And ahhhhhhhh. I never want to write again. xD

    AilahEvelynMae YESSSSSS amazing job!!!
    Nov 30, 2023

    Spearmint WHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
    Dec 1, 2023

  • My fingers hurt from writing so much today.


    AilahEvelynMae same!!!!! you got this!!!!
    Nov 30, 2023

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    ^ pretend that's a fence or something =P

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    It's a bunny.

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    (Book 1 spoilers ahead...)

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    Okay, so instead of doing Nano for the last couple of days, I've been filling in plotholes for Book 1 and just doing some adjustments to the prophetic statements just to give it some consistency throughout the story so that the ending (which I still need to write!) will make sense!

    Anyway, one of the things that has been hindering me about Book 4 is... what does the wedding between Diamea and the Lady even look like? Because it should really be described beforehand! After all, one of the reasons why the Swans take over the language class in the first place is so that Alainna can learn the songs of the Lady so she can get married!! But like... nowhere is this really covered in the class. Which makes sense that Cyrus would avoid teaching it, because can you imagine Cyrus leading that class and teaching the girls about Diamea's love songs??? The girls would go CRAZY. Cyrus wouldn't want to teach that at all!!

    And yet, that lesson in Book 1 is kind of important. That would make the beginning scene in Book 3 funnier where everyone discusses wedding planning. And it is absolutely needed for Book 4.

    SO. I need to put the wedding lesson in Book 1. But also, Cyrus would rather die than teach that class. So here's the idea...

    Right now in the book, Cyrus gets pretty sick to the point of falling asleep in class. Then he makes a fool out of himself later on after that class, to the point where Archondid drags him out of the classroom like, "COME ON, CYRUS. YOU NEED A NAP." Then the chapter ends. The next chapter is the infamous gift-giving exercise.

    WHAT IF.

    There is a chapter in between those two chapters???

    Cyrus is sick and can't teach class, so Sergius takes over instead and decides that this is the best moment to teach Alainna the love songs between Diamea and the Lady, since he decides that Cyrus probably shouldn't teach the class for obvious reasons. So he grabs Cyrus's extensive notes about the class (since Cyrus has prepared for the class, he just hasn't gathered the courage to do it yet).


    That way, you get to see why Sergius is not a teacher. And it would be painfully hilarious, all the while delivering all the information I need for the series overall.

    ANYWAY. That's my idea.

    Spoiler! :
    Sergius teaching love songs... bahahhaaa XDD that does sound painfully hilarious...

    Nov 26, 2023

    Snoink ...I might start writing it now and just include it on my nano word count. XD

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    Also, what if Sergius has them act it out???

    Nov 26, 2023

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  • Tell my nephew that his idea is great and he should totally write it into something amazing and that his story might suck at first, but first drafts always suck and that's okay because he is creating something out of literally nothing and that is a magic in itself.
    Book wrote:Dear whomever may see this comment,
    I have an idea. and whenever I have an idea its usually a bad one, but let me know how you feel about this one. So I wrote a poem a few months back and I was thinking: HOW ABOUT I TURN IT INTO A BOOK or at least a few chapters to see how it does and if its a hit I might keep writing and if its not such a great thing then idk if a few like it I have to look at my schedule and see if I have time. I was hoping to get a chapter or two out by around Thanksgiving. You never know. Anyway tell me how you feel about this and I might do it.

    Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and a great day.

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    luxeterna nEPHEW!??!?!?!?
    Nov 22, 2023

    Snoink @Book is my nephew. :)
    Nov 22, 2023

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  • It's only noon and I... met word count??? And finished Part 2 of my novel??? BE STILL MY HEART.

    Spearmint WOOHOOO!! :D
    Nov 21, 2023

    OrabellaAvenue THAT'S AMAZING!!!!
    Nov 21, 2023

  • OrabellaAvenue Yay!!! You did it!!! (I didn't haha)
    Nov 19, 2023


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— T.S. Eliot, Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats