RubinLikes2Write

Well, because I suck at grammar I'm not going to give you that type of advice, but rather a potential buyer of your story. :) I really liked this the ...

Bloody Eagles, First of all, I love the story idea. Is it in anyway influenced by The Hunger Games? If not then you should really read that book, it's really ...

and wasp picking at the delicate features . I don't think youn meant to say wasp. Am I wrong? Other then that very good! :)

Three things: 1. You said the foreign exchange student was from Japan, but in your description he sounded white. 2. You also put that he was there to learn french, ...

*happily humms while writing review* sorry for sorta of spamming your review box but...well, sorry. :) Okay review time. Its good but put a TON of description in. It sort ...

Me Likey! Adore the fact that you have a patient with CIPA and makes up for it with over dramatic emotions! haha! I can tell this is going to be ...

I'm. A. Jerk. I'm sooooooo sososososo sorry for the comment on ch.1. this is turning out to be quite good. :) one tiny thing that's still not really working for ...

I'm really really sorry but this piece wasn't for me. I can tell it's very well written but it was way to slow, and i saw no plot. If you ...

Oh my god. You need to write/ post faster!! I'm constantly shocked at the talent in this place!! I agree with Tottalyyws, the cell phone working in another world should ...

Hahahaha nice plot twist at the end!! In the begging try to speed thing up just a little. And I'm serious just a tiny bit. Otherwise I liked it the ...

Heya, good work! Very intriguing! Will there be more? I hope so! Your very talented. Sorry about the choppy sentences, ha-ha I'm tired. But one thing you could put in ...

Hey! I'm Robin (ignore my screen name) and I'm reviewing you! Oh ya, really since I suck at spelling I'm not pointing stuff out like that, just plot. OK well, ...

heya heya heyy!! SO! I'm starting to get the feel of things. I was if-y with chapter one, but now you have me intrigued. I love how the sky is ...

Heya! OK I noticed some typos but nothing that the people who revised you before me didn't cover. :) So, I agree that the mother thing was pretty confusing. But ...

heya! Its me! Well i can tell DreamWalker and Pippiedooda went over most of the grammar... wow they're really good at that! Okay Well at the very first part I ...