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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 3 : From Me To You

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! I skimmed through your previous chapters to get a better understanding of the story, but I apologize beforehand if I misunderstand anything! Overall, ...

    Sep 12, 2023

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: I'm growing up.

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! I am not sure whether this story is fiction or personal, but it pulled at my heartstrings nevertheless. You used such simple language ...

    Sep 12, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: Fractures in Forever: Chapter 1: Briefing

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! I am going to jump straight into the review this time! Those puny politicians think they could actually tell him what to do! ...

    Jul 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: Fractures in Forever: Prologue

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! This was a really interesting first chapter! I love how you set the ground for the story while being vague and not giving ...

    Jul 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic
    Re: An Intricate Symphony - Chapter 3: Staccato

    Hey alpacaboss! RandomTalks here with a short review! And so the mystery continues! I have to admit I was a little put off in the previous chapter when Blaire was ...

    Jul 15, 2023

  • Other » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: 1st grade boy

    Hi loveissourgrapes! RandomTalks here with a short review! This was a really sweet story that perfectly captured the feverish excitement and thrill of developing one's first crush. I love how ...

    Jul 8, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Film, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Many Perspectives(S1, ep1)

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! This was an interesting start to the story! I admit I was a little confused throughout the episode as things kept on progressing ...

    Jul 5, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: LC excerpt 2 part 1

    Hello simpleJ! RandomTalks here with a short review! This was quite an interesting snippet you have shared with us! It has all the elements of a great story - romance, ...

    Jun 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic
    Re: An Intricate Symphony - Chapter 2: Grave

    Hi alpacaboss! RandomTalks here with a short review! I went through your previous chapter to get a better understanding of the story - its only very rarely that I get ...

    Jun 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: King of the Court - 13

    Hi yosh! RandomTalks here with a short review! Wow! This was one intense chapter! I did not really think we would get a glimpse of the backstories of Jackson Wills' ...

    Jun 21, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: King of the Court - 12

    Hi yosh! RandomTalks here with a short review! I really liked where you went with this chapter, especially the way you framed Dwayne and Spencer's personal storylines. I had been ...

    Jun 13, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: King of the Court - 11

    Hi yosh! RandomTalks here with a review! I know I am very late but here's to hoping I can complete your novel by this month! I learned basketball. But deep ...

    Jun 7, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: King of the Court - 10

    Hi yosh! RandomTalks here with a short review! I am very sorry for the long gaps in between these reviews - I've just been too caught up in real life ...

    May 11, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic
    Re: Model on a Magazine Chapter 1

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! I thought that this was a really great first chapter! You have got a relatable protagonist, a really natural bond between the characters ...

    Apr 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: King of the Court - 9

    Hi yosh! RandomTalks here with a short review! I absolutely loved this chapter! To say I did not see any of that coming would be an understatement - I loved ...

    Apr 24, 2023


I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights