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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: "Breathe"

    OKAY! *cracks knuckles* Been so long since I reviewed and was actually active Here we go: Clear in expression and well thought out. Flows well and slow giving the effect ...

    Sep 21, 2017

  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic
    Re: Saxophone of the Undead(v.2)

    Hey Hey there! I'm here to give you a review, its been a while so I'm a bit rusty. ;) I will give you some comments after a first reading ...

    Jun 25, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: hero

    Hey! I am here to drop a review :D Here is my interpretation of the poem : A hypocritical 'hero' attacked a person in this case 'you' because in his ...

    Dec 27, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Musings of a hopeless optimist

    Hey I am here to leave you a review! I really liked this poem, you really aced it. From the diction, images and to the broken rhyme. Let me elaborate ...

    Dec 8, 2016

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: I Should Be an Author! (School Argumentative Essay)

    Hi :D I am here to leave you a review. I am mostly going to focus on the structure of this essay since it is an argumentative one. So the ...

    Dec 4, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: A Weed's Rant

    Hey :) here to give you a review. This poem is so adorable and cute and so sad! I enjoyed reading it greatly so much so I read it out ...

    Oct 30, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: "It's Time to Stop"

    Hi there I am here to give you a review :) I am going to split this critique into two sections one being the things that I did like about ...

    Oct 30, 2016

  • Other » Other, Action / Adventure
    Re: Tiko

    Hey there :D So I am going to tackle this review as a short story since it has no previous works, however, I will be keeping in mind that this ...

    Oct 27, 2016

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Whispers & Wavelengths

    Hey there :D Ok so since you asked on the Story help club here I am to tear this work up xD To start off I am going to comment ...

    Oct 22, 2016

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Phoenix

    Hey there cas I'm here to review. So as I know this is prose poetry I have some tips that I hope you can find useful. 1) (this only counts ...

    Oct 2, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: When Mothers Fought Daughters

    Hi. I am here to give you a review. So let me start off with a few nitpicks that caught my eye. A bulky figure, Mrs Omara always looked serious ...

    Sep 3, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    Re: I like nature, better than maths.

    Hey you :) I am here to give you a review. I am going to tackle each stanza individually. The first stanza: I suggest that the first line does not ...

    Aug 19, 2016

  • Other » Realistic, Other
    Re: Through my eyes...

    Hey Told ya all I'll review this when I got the time ;) First off I love the first line if this piece, its a great topic sentence as it ...

    Aug 8, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Oh what do you see?

    Hey I am here to leave you a review :D I would like to say I liked this poem and I understood the concept of it however I do have ...

    Aug 5, 2016

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other
    Re: Dear Elder Brother

    Hey I am here to review! I loved everything about this poem from the concept the imagery and the formatting! I do have little issues that i think can make ...

    Jul 23, 2016


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