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I am very sorry about the way you think that I was trying to discredit the bible. I only wrote this because I saw a writing prompt on Pinterest and ...

With the fact that everyone else knew God was, I should probably make it more clear that he wasn't the only one. Jinzindi was a religion that worshipped God, who ...

Thank you for all of thee reviews! I am grateful for all of the feedback, and will work towards following them

Thanks :)

Thank you very much :D I'm glad you enjoyed it - Also, soon you shall see that the voice in our protagonist's head will play a VERY big role in ...

I know you are my friend and all, but at least review a work that is not your own just to get points. You could do the same but help ...

I'm not gonna lie. That ACTUALLY scared me (and made me feel a tiny bit sick towards the end)

The whole point is that he DOESN'T want to interact with his companion. Sorry if that wasn't clear

Thanks :)

Ok, but I would make the story have something more to the story than just the last line. Seeing as you said you wanted it to be gothic, I suggest ...

Ok. I%u2019m very sorry about this, I will remember next time. I forgot about that part %uD83D%uDE10

BTW just a note to everyone, my friend made this account AFTER I published this, so I could not make him a co-author. When I upload the next chapter I ...

Hi! You could literally just tell me - You are sitting right next to me :)

Imagine he wanted to be a slytherine, but he wasn't all snobby about it! Like he is a kind slytherine or something. That would be cool!

Cancel this, accidently hit submit! woops