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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 35.2

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I'm loving the way this is progressing. You're setting up the heist very nicely; I feel like the tension and anxiety is palpable ...

    15 hours ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 35.1

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Very glad to be back reviewing this wonderful piece

    Jun 22, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic
    Re: Paranoid [Ch. Ⅰ, Old Prey]

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I noticed your work has been in the Green Room a while, so I figured I'd give it a review to bump it ...

    Jun 21, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 127: "The Rat"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Ooh, finally meeting the rat king! I have to say, I'm so glad you went with that particular route; I find real life ...

    Jun 20, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Son of the Night - Chapter 3: Los Angeles

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! (Figured I'd give this one a review too, since it's also still chilling in the Green Room!) I like how you're continuing the ...

    Jun 19, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 126: "The Change"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Back to the Sea Mother, I see! I liked how this conversation tied Tamiyat into it as well; I feel like, in a ...

    Jun 18, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 125: "The Rats"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I liked the introduction of the rat characters! I'm glad to see Hasda's special ability and connection with animals have come to the ...

    Jun 17, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Supernatural
    Re: The monster within | Chapter Four |

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I have to say I'm not that familiar with the source material for this, but I did go back and read the previous ...

    Jun 16, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Son of the Night - Chapter 2: Nineteen

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I noticed your work has been in the green room for quite a bit, so I thought I'd give it a review to ...

    Jun 15, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 124: "The River"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I liked the change of pace in this section; I feel like a lot of the previous ones have been very Hasda's Trial ...

    Jun 14, 2024

  • Poetry » Satire, Other
    Re: Twurkin'

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! This piece seems to be a parody (at least, I'm assuming) of rap songs, particularly the kinds of people who write those kinds ...

    Jun 13, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: How The Father came to be

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I can't say I've read any of your stories starring The Father, but after reading this one, I might go back and read ...

    Jun 12, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 123: "The Birds"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! You nailed the eeriness in this part, in the beginning especially. The descriptions really allowed that anticipation to build up, and honestly, it's ...

    Jun 11, 2024

  • Lyrics » Chickens, Other
    Re: Ridicule is fun

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I enjoyed reading your lyrics! While they didn't necessarily have an established tune, I think you did a great job at conveying their ...

    Jun 10, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Loosely Lawful | 9

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! We definitely got more answers than I was expecting regarding the contract on Benvolius! I really like that the language of both the ...

    Jun 9, 2024


i like that the title of dr jekyll and mr hyde makes a clear stance that the embodiment of one’s own evil doesn’t get a claim to the doctorate
— waywardxwallflower