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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 105: "The Thread"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! It's good we got some explanation about Thrax. I am still a little confused though; not sure if it's just cause I've not ...

    Apr 10, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 104: "The Other"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Ah, I always love it when we get the whole pantheon together. You always describe them all so well. It's also nice to ...

    Mar 25, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: So, "What's love"? ,You asked

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I enjoyed this poem! I think the point about how dually tragic and beautiful love is. I loved how you used a lot ...

    Mar 12, 2023

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Inciting Incident p.1

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I noticed your work has been in the green room for a bit, so I thought I'd read and review it to bump ...

    Mar 11, 2023

  • Script » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Operation Strikethorn

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I enjoyed this script! I'm always excited whenever they're posted on YWS. I'm aware that this was posted on a dare, and while ...

    Mar 10, 2023

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic
    Re: joshua's journey

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! This is an interesting poem! It's structured more like prose, but there are certain features of it that are very poetic. I don't ...

    Mar 9, 2023

  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative
    Re: Professor - 3

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I noticed that your work has been in the green room for a while, so I decided to give it a review to ...

    Mar 7, 2023

  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other
    Re: Rose Davidson, the poor dear…

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Ooh, this story was certainly chilling! It definitely had the vibes of one of those messed-up stories that start out innocuous enough, but ...

    Mar 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative
    Re: A Lost Sojourner.

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! And welcome to the site—I hope you've had a good experience so far! I thought this poem was very interesting! I'm not religious ...

    Mar 5, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Untitled

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I enjoyed reading this story! It was a very interesting plot to focus on—it almost felt, to me, more like a one-shot angst ...

    Mar 4, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 103: "The Haunt"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Aw, this was a sweet chapter. I really enjoyed the convo between Thane and Charax; I get the vibe that he sees himself ...

    Mar 3, 2023

  • Article / Essay » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 102: "The Cage"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Ah, we're back to Tamiyat. I wondered when we'd be returning to her. It seems like the main conflicts when Charax was unconscious ...

    Mar 2, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 101: "The Catch-up"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Well, this catch-up was certainly helpful, both to me and Charax. I enjoyed getting a little more clarity on the whole egg situation, ...

    Mar 1, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 100: "The Brood"

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing this piece! I'm very excited to be back with Charax and Malia ...

    Feb 21, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature
    Re: LMS VI: Let Me Live Tonight 1.12

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! (Also sorry for the review spam—the perils of review day, I'm afraid!) Aw, well that was depressing. I thought we were going to ...

    Jan 29, 2023


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