Nightlyowl

I just feel like I should clarify your second point and why there is repetition in "Home/I'm at home/ It's a house" Its more so the fact that this place ...

I loved it, it was cute. Unfortunitally, when we did Wizzard week in 4th grade and we picked from the hat for our houses... I was put in Slitherinth... -insert ...

Wow this poem was great. I liked it a lot it was deep and yet simple. I really loved it and hope to read more. 4 owls out of 5. ...

I loved this, and I think you did a great job. It was simple and to the point and hit home. You did a great job, keep up the good ...

Thank you. I have been actually working on this a whole lot. I wasn't actually planning on making it part of the story I don't think, but I just sat ...

Well though I'd love to make it longer, its for a competition with 150 words or less. So that's all that I was able to do. I hope that explains ...

That was really good. I can't wait to read more of it. But I did have to agree and say a little less of the language. Though it does seem ...

Wow that's great! What a picture that paints! The tune reminded me of the "Cat in the Hat" And other such stories. I used to love those and now I ...

I liked this I really did. The only error I saw was this So just before she's leave he reassures that help isn't far But otherwise it's good keep up ...

I fixed it up. I do hope this is better.

I loved your poem, it was deep and I could picture it perfectly. The format didn't look like a poem though, but it did have a good rhythm to it ...

I changed the gate to gates and wing to wings, as well as conflicting to conflicted, but I liked the ring line so I just changed it so it would ...

Thank you, would you believe this is one of my first poems? Haha. I'm glad you liked it, and it was about suicide.

All right, thank you. I made the corrections, and I do have more. I believe I have up to chapter 3 posted. Chapters 4 and 5 will be coming as ...