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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In Memoriam

    I really like this, it was moving, telling you the different approaches people took and take to the 9/11 attack. The: "Pray for the soldiers" vs. "Bring them home" "Help ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .

    I really like this poem, its how I've been feeling with me and a friend of mine. Haha. I really liked it it was simple but it touched home. Great ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Seas of Gold

    I liked this a lot. It made me think. I believe that the Seas of Gold is kind of like fitting in. And everything you said in the poem made ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Pyrigia Levis

    I really liked this, at first I thought it would be like Avatar, but it surprised me and didn't turn out much like that movie at all. I'm impressed. Over ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Im Too Young For Love

    I liked this, it was sweet and made me smile. I can agree with that, I'm too young for love. Haha. Anyway. The only thing I saw wrong was in ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not Forever

    I really like this, its sweet and makes me smile. The only thing I'd say other than the few things from what others said was instead of "anyways" at the ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Falling Like Rain

    Oh my god I completly loved that! It was saddening but I do enjoy saddening work. Again its totally relateable and totally didn't sound forced. I can't wait to read ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Here I Am

    I really loved this, it was deep and full of emotion in my opinion. I really did enjoy this, but there was one error I found in your poem. Told ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter One

    I like this, its just enough to make me wanting more. I really like this and am wondering where this is going. I can picture it perfectly, even without a ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Stranger

    I like this very much and would love it if you posted on my profile when you have more. I really like the main character she seems spunky and born ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Delusion

    Wow... this just left me speechless. It was amazing, and I can't wait to hear more from you. My favorite part was We’re wingless in this aimless flight, Armless in ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Coffee

    Haha I like that! It explains my relationship with coffee perfectly. I only smell it, I don't like it. =P Ew it tastes so... blah! Haha. Loved how it didn't ...

    Jul 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Softness of Doves

    I loved this! I really did. I have to go find the others if they are posted. The only thing I thought sounded a bit off was I am panged ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Hunter's Night

    Wow... I just... I love this. Please post on my wall when you write more! I loved this so much keep up the great work! I'm not good at editing ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Desperate Desires

    I loved this, you really have me interested. Please post on my wall when you have written more I would love to comment and read it. There were only two ...

    Jun 5, 2011


Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness
— Allen Ginsburg