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Nightlyowl

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Dreaming of Autumn

    Hi, Owl again. I really liked this, it had a deep meaning that I could see and relate to. I hate how everyone needs the new phones and computers, and ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You Loved Me First

    I thought this was a very touching and moving poem. It really portrays how insecure people are and not just girls. I am not very religious, but this poem made ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Beautiful Ocean

    This was beautiful. I absolutly loved it, it was moving and deep. There wasn't much I could say about it that would help make it better since I belive that ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Iridescent

    This was great. The end makes me think that the figure was an angel and he died right then. I also wonder what happened to give him the plague. I ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: It's so easy

    I liked this but I do have some nitpicks. Parts like this: Just remember, hold on tight Squeeze my hand with all your might Let not doubt be in your ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Living in a Box

    Hi! Well all in all I loved this, it left me wondering what the hell was gonna happen next. A few quick things though. 1st. is a simple error here... ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hidden

    Hi again, haha. I loved how this was very contrast. Showing both the light and the dark and it makes you wonder what could look like that, until you see ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Snow White Spoof

    Hahah! This was hysterical! I loved it. It was cute and definitly a spoof. You did a great job, I love things when they're spoofed beacause then when you think ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Soldier's Lullaby

    I really loved this poem, it was simple and it flowed well. I really enjoyed it not only because I like things that have to do with soldiers, but also ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Random Choice of Poems

    I loved all your poems. My favorite was: Poetry without music Is like a politician Giving a speech. Poetry with music Is like a politician Giving a speech And handing ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Little boy

    I loved this. It reminds me of my friend. I thought that this piece was short but perfect in that way. I would have liked it a bit longer but ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cain and Abel

    I really enjoyed this. I did get some of the metephors, and some I did not. But all in all it was great and I would love to read more ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Celeb Dream

    I really enjoyed this, it was sweet and made me smile. I also thought it was great to hear that a guy could have a celeb crush. I was very ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Your Scar

    I really loved this, I thought it explained realationships real well. It really hit home with me since I've been feeling similar to that with my best friend. I especially ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: no name

    Hi there, I don't really understand this poem. I don't think that its because of the subject topic, because that I understand, a boy's mother dies and he takes pills ...

    Sep 11, 2011


I was never insane except upon occasions when my heart was touched.
— Edgar Allan Poe