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I'm glad you like your poem. Well my poem but it is for you. What do you mean "passion project"? I will try to punctuate if it will make me ...

i do like your advice and I think I will change it. Thank you. By the way is his sadness and depression. Thanks :D

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I really liked it. The religious aspect was really good. I haven't read the other poems so I wasn't sure what was going on. Good job. Your style is different ...

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I liked it. The religious aspect was really good. I haven't read the other poems so I wasn't sure what was going on. Good job

cool thanks :D

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First of all, the writing was awesome! It was seriously one of the best things I've read. I mean, "animal fat", "the lipids of some poor animal" has such a ...

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First of all, the writing was awesome! It was seriously one of the best things I've read. I mean, "animal fat", "the lipids of some poor animal" has such a ...

Dude first your writing is awesome. Second, your imagery is awesome. Three, the "next time" was awesome. Four, the whole thing doesn't suck it is awesome. The word awesome is ...

I'm sorry.

I like it, it is short and not all that sweet. I do think explosions are beautiful so I guess I'm ignorant. Why did you write this, if you don't ...

yay thanks. I'm so glad you like my writing and I appreciate the critique. Thanks a ton enjoy the other chapters :D

thanks. I'm so happy you liked it.

guilty is charged

thanks :D I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback. The throw you send you back was mentioned a lot. I meant to say "I could throw you back" ...

yay someone noticed the ties to supernatural. The phantom is constructed around Castiel and some characters from Attack on Titan. thanks