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Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! First of all, before I get into the characters themselves I really like the very first sentence of this chapter. The undeniable ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! Of course as always with I Knew, I really like it! Each chapter is amazing! I want to talk about each character ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review!! This story is short but by no means was any less interesting and such an incredible piece to read! I really enjoyed ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! I really like this writing. I like how at first it starts nice and calm and I like the description of the ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and reveiw! ooooooooooooh. I think I might have just found another series I am REALLY interested in. But to the reviewing. My first impression ...

Mercedes Blue here to read and review! First of all, before I even get into the writing I just want to say that I really like the picture that was ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! First of all, already I really like the description given in just the first two paragraphs. I wonder if a fish would ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! It seems already like such a good while has passed since I last read this series but I haven't forgotten about it ...

heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! Sorry for jumping off the grid for a moment there. But I am back to continue reading! Based on the disclaimer I'm ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review First of all, I want to say that I can't believe I read this now and read the first chapter first. But ...

Hi! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! First, before I start I want to thank you for adding a disclaimer to what is in the story. The age tags ...

Hi! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! First of all, I love the mystery you very quickly bring into the story in the second sentence. Already I'm wondering why ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here! This chapter is definitely shorted than the prologue but it's so good! And it's not too short either. I think you put in enough information without ...

Heya! Mercedes Blue here! Before I go on to the review I want to say that I'm really impressed with just how many posts you have to just this one ...

*TO ANYONE READING COMMENTS BEFORE THE WRITING DO NOT READ THIS UNLESS YOU WANT SPOILERS!!!!* Heya! So first off I want to say that The chapter is good. Like really ...