Malooga

You're no idiot, I'm quite flattered. No worries!

You know I didn't notice the tree branch look, I might start telling people I did that on purpose. :P By the way! Thanks for reviewing this twice hehe. (see ...

You caught me! The first person to notice the indirect rhyme on the last stanza, well done sir. ;) I have looked at that stanza for years and wondered what ...

Hey there! Thanks for the review, and some good advice on the double word usage, it has been fixed. As for using the word Mother, it does not refer to ...

WOW! That's some high praise haha, you are much, MUCH too kind. No worries I have dozens of poems, some short stories and a novel (work in progress) all ready ...

The punctuation most definitely needed some work. However I do not agree that line lengths should match simply for the aesthetic pleasure. Syllable counts should be similar, but unfortunately my ...

You are correct that hyphen was misplaced, I fixed that error thank you for pointing it out to me. As for knowing a lot about sex, I'm sure everybody would ...

Wait now I take your meaning. Sorry about that -- I tried changing it but it wont let me. The last site I was on had weird parameters in their ...

Thanks!

Thanks so much for the kind words! :)

Thanks so much! I actually wrote the poem entirely in French originally, but found that people didn't like translating the poem (plus the meaning was lost in many instances), thank ...

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"Any poetry is good depending on feeling and emotion..." Huh? Is that not exactly what I said regurgitated? Angst is a feeling, so is happiness and confusion. It isn't hard ...

Hello, thanks for expanding on my review I re-read the poem after you explained your process, I can definitely see the value in the structure you used.

I'm not sure how the Green Room works but hey, no complaints with the added exposure wink wink. As for the poem, it draws more from a childhood memory than ...