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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction
    Re: Ramla Final

    Hi, @GodfreyBouilon. I am here for yet another review. Note: I hope that I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through ...

    Jul 1, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: World

    Hi CharlesThePhantom, I'm Lives and I am here to review your poem. I hope that my reviews don't offend anyone,my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through ...

    Jun 27, 2018

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: You Don't Hear Me

    Hello @saifmmlp2, I'm Lives Welcome to YWS. I like your work and have decided to review it. I hope that I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is ...

    Jun 27, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: no. one lies here anymore

    @killeham Salutations, I really like your poem and am happy to review it. I hope that I don't offend anyone with my reviews, my only intent is to edify and ...

    Jun 26, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Nonet Memory

    Salutations @Aley, I love your poem and have decided to review it. Note: I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews, my only intent is to edify and encourage ...

    Jun 25, 2018

  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: Amidst the Chaos

    Salutations, I am honored to be the second person to review the first historical fiction poem ever published in YWS. I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only ...

    Jun 23, 2018

  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fanfiction
    Re: Beckendorf

    Salutations @Lupa22, as promised I read some of your other work, and am here to review it. I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is to ...

    Jun 20, 2018

  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fanfiction
    Re: Annabeth

    Salutations @Lupa22, @Lives4Christ24 is here for yet another review. I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through constructive criticism.

    Jun 20, 2018

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Every Other Girl

    Hi @TheLeakyPen, @Lives4Christ24 is here for yet another review. I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through constructive criticism. ...

    Jun 19, 2018

  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Letters of The

    Salutations @GrayButterfly, I have decided to write my review in the form of a letter in spirit of your poem. I can't believe your work is still in the green ...

    Jun 19, 2018

  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural
    Re: Poem #3

    Salutations @DEA. @Lives4Christ24 is here for yet another review. I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through constructive criticism. ...

    Jun 19, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Other Meanings

    Hi, @TheLeakyPen. @Lives4Christ24 is here for yet another review. I hope my reviews don't offend anyone, my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through constructive criticism. First ...

    Jun 18, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: For Him

    Salutations @TheLeakyPen. @Lives4Christ24 is here for yet another review. I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through constructive criti

    Jun 16, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Be the writer of your own life

    Salutations @Eros, I love your usename. Lives4Christ24 is here for yet another review. I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews, my only intent is to edify and encourage ...

    Jun 14, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: A reminder

    Salutations @Radrook, Lives is here for yet another review. I hope I don't offend n anyone with my review, that is not my intent. My intent is to edify and ...

    Jun 14, 2018


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage