Laurenh6

Oh okay! Thank you for the advice .. Sounds like I have a lot to improve xD

Okay thank you for your help Felistia :) :D

Okay thank you for your help Felistia :) :D

Have a nice holiday !!

Hahah.. okay xD

Wait why am i saying thanks.. you're welcome I meant xD

Oh okay no worries didn't see that comment! Thanks again :)

Hey thank you for the review I'm glad you thought it was alright :P, did it keep you hooked? I have a few questions if that's ok :) . How ...

Thank you for your review , I didn't quite understand your first criticism though - what do you mean ? :)

Alright , thank you for your feedback :)

Thank you for your feedback - really appreciate it :) ... You say "he" being unexplained is a criticism - but that's literally a major part of my story so ...

Alright , thank you :)

Alright thank you for the review ! I'll make the changes you've said and all that jazz.. Could I ask, how do you find it as a story though? Does ...

Wow thank you so much for reviewing, really means a lot and I'm so glad you liked it %uD83D%uDE0A

Wow thank you so much ! I'm glad you like it means so much :D .. And The picture .. You'll have to wait and seeee ;)