Lauren

You didn't want nit-picks, which are my speciality, but here I am glad to say I think there's no need of them. Grammar, vocab, spelling = perfect. And now, the ...

Elizabeth Gaskell's Wives and Daughters & Cranford Ooh, Merry, I command you to add 'North and South' to that list. It is the ultimate Gaskell novel. And you absolutely must ...

Wuthering Heights was . . . good. But I wish both MCs had died at the end. They do, don't they? Heh. I'm only judging by the movie I saw, ...

Hi :) I'm afraid I didn't read 'Sophia's Suitors' which is probably for the best as they likely have a fair amount in common? I really liked this. Your vocabulary, ...

So this is going to be about incest, hmm? Well, do handle it sensitively--it's very taboo. Such issues have the potential of being written very carefully and poignantly, or absolutely ...

Probably not a good idea to bump your own thread. I know how it is though. Be patient is all ;) Kade Carlise was an intelligent young man born into ...

Hi :) So basically what I'll do is comment as I read and then do a little summary at the end. Okey-doke? Sometimes the emptiness of it hurt my eyes. ...

Very well written, KnightlyAngel09 -- I can't fault it, of course, in vocabulary! I think it succeeds in what it was intended for, and humour was evident. The writer seemed ...

Just reread this book and came back to here. I'm cringing at what I wrote. Came back to the book with a less critical and, I hope, more matured, eye. ...

Hi, and welcome to the site 8) I think I'll quote sections and then either rewrite them in a way I think might sound better or just hint if something ...

Hi :D I could not feel my legs anymore, I think, to draw us in, you should the end sentence here, and have the rest as a new sentence. I ...

Greetings, fellow YWSer :wink: What I usually do is pick up on things as I read through and note them down, then do a little summary at the end. Here ...

This was good, if a little strange :) I think you wrote it pretty immaculately considering that it was intended to be short and quick on impact. I think grammar ...

Hi :) Just saw this (even though it's been here a while) and thought it looked interesting, so here goes... *sidles off for a read* “Must the Sun I know ...

For me it's Charlotte. I love both Jane Eyre and Villette and couldn't finish Wuthering Heights---I mean, it was good, yeah, but a bit silly. Plus I hated Heathcliff :roll:. ...