Lauren

Awh, I really liked this, it was ... touching. You know, because everyone wants to still be in love when they're old and all. Well, I see what you set ...

Hi. I like this a lot - I read it all the way through without getting bored or anything. It is, as said, fresh in tone and description. I like ...

Hi. I think it was interesting, quite good in fact, but after a while, I'm afraid it got a bit, well, prolonged. It soon felt as though I was reading ...

Thea!! I never knew you had such a talent for writing. No fair! It was really good, Thea. Your vocabulary was especially varied. There is no repetition and you carry ...

Read this a while back when I had not distinguished any particular taste :smt053 Sorry to say I found it puerile, unoriginal, monotonous... and the rest. Thumbs down from me.

Very well-written, I must say! I think you've really set the mood with this - it is very mature-sounding, not to mention subtle and poetic. Question is, can you keep ...

Wow, wow, wow! This was great! I did not tire of it one bit and was disappointed when I reached the end. Honestly, I think this has great potential. I ...

Hi. First off, I would like to say that it reminds me of something the fabulous Jennifer Donnelly would write (and that's no insult). Well, back to the text itself: ...

Hello :) I thought this was pretty good - it works well to draw us in. Your descriptions are well constructed, too. However, it is so, so short :( Perhaps ...

Hello. Will get straight on to the analysis thingy. The sound of horse hooves pounding on moist soil roared through the quiet town, bouncing off the rural manors and abundant ...

Hello there! Well, my first thoughts are that this has potential. You have a good plot going - but I do have some hold-ups (sorry). First off, you've told us ...

Good start, but to be honest, it didn't really draw me in. But of course, there is always room for improvement - what would the world be without trial and ...

Hi, alicat159! So, I like what I'm reading, which is always good. It seems that this is reasonably strong foundations for a good story. There's definitely a good character in ...