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Hello! Just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on completing the first week of the Great Tortoise Race! We have already crossed one-fourth of the way and I know you can make it to the end!

For those of you who are not aware, I have a small fanclub on YWS (Purple Flame Fan Club in "Clubs" section) for my books Rehenowa and I Knew. Here you can find pictures that I took of places that inspired me, drawings of my characters, etc.
Let me know what you think.
@Rinisha @Rose @DreamyAlice @Broady771 @AuthenticallyAngie

I Knew Chapters 21-30 are out!
@cookiesandcream123

I Knew Chapters 18-20 are out!
@cookiesandcream123

Dear Readers:
I wish to inform you that I am writing this to disappoint you for the first (or fifth) time since the start of our journey through the "pages" of Rehenowa. It is not unusual for me to have a "middle" project between finishing one project and starting a new one. This project often does not work out and is rarely ever completed.

I believe Rehenowa is serving as such a "middle" project. While I find the plot and a select few of the characters interesting (mainly Ramien), I fail to bond with the characters in a way that makes it worth my effort to write them, not particularly surprising if you take into account the uncomfortably large age gap between those characters and myself.

I maaaaaayyyyyy still continue Rehenowa, but at present, I am giving it a break as I search for inspiration and a new set of characters to mirror more closely my undying favorites of my novel, I Knew.

To that end, I would like to thank you all very much for your inspiring words and comments. A special thanks to Rose and Rinisha who (as far as I can tell) read every chapter I posted here and wrote me very memorable comments (that often made me laugh). You are both awesome.

As for my characters of Rehenowa...farewell for now!
-Kaia Jersaga
P.S. If you are interested, the first fifteen chapters of I Knew are posted on this website and a large portion of them are still in the green room if you're looking to earn your review team some points.
@Rinisha @Rose @VengefulReaper @MercedesBlue

I forgot to mention that Magic Chapter 2 is in MercedesBlue's portfolio. Here is the link. Magic: Chapter 2
@Chandleree123

Hey KaiaJersaga!

I hope you are enjoying your time on YWS, you are doing an amazing job with all the reviews! One thing I suggest is when you want to comment on some specific parts of the literary work you can quote it. By pasting it with the quoting tags like this- [quote*] once upon a time...[/quote*] without the asterisk of course

It would look something like this

once upon a time..

The Big Book of YWS Codes is a wonderful place from where youcan learn all th codes available on yws, you write such great reviews, it will help you make your reviews look more precise and organized. I will be happy to help however I can:)

-Alice^-^

Question for anyone who knows the answer...How do you post images in the forums or clubs? There's no place to upload photos as far as I'm seeing except on the wall.

Hi, readers!
I just wanted to let you know that I'm going to rework Rehenowa Chapter 8 (the scene when Rushita first shows up), so Chapters 8-10 may end up outdated. I will let you know about further updates as I make them.
@Rose @Rinisha @MercedesBlue

Excellent job Reviewing today!

A Late Welcome to YWS! Tremendous work reviewing so far!

Magic Chapter 3 is out.
@Rinisha

REHENOWA UPDATE!
Chapter 10 is out!
@Rinisha @Rose

REHENOWA UPDATES!
I've got multiple updates for multiple people, so here goes!

1. All the chapters have been edited and are ready for reading @VengefulReaper @MercedesBlue

2. THE chapter @Rinisha and @Rose have been waiting for is out. I combined two chapters because one of them was so short so CHAPTER 9 is the latest. Rehenowa Chapter 9 Check it out when you get a chance.

I will continue to edit as I write, so there will still be details I will need to add on occasion. I will continue to post those updates on my wall as I have been doing.

So far so good on the editing.
New *cute* scene from Chapter 6:

Jaith smiled in response. “Nice to meet you,” he responded.
Using Jaith’s arm as a support, Miki slid off the sofa. Jaith glanced down at his own jeans on the boy, swallowing the twelve-year-old’s skinny legs and completely hiding his feet. Forcing a useless grin, Jaith leaned down and rolled up the ends of the boy’s jeans to just above his ankles. He stepped back, glancing down at the single black thread enclosing Miki’s left ankle. Two little baby feathers hung from it.
Jaith took Miki’s arm. “That should make it a bit easier to walk, huh?”
Miki lifted his chin slightly and let Jaith lead him into the kitchen.
@Rinisha @Rose