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Hello KaavyaK! Dropping by to give you a review using the YWS'mores Method . I have not read the other parts of this story, so I will do my best ...
Oct 8, 2024
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Hello again, Juhxi! Dropping by with another review, with the use of the YWS'mores Method . :) The Top Graham Layer: Oooo I am excited to meet Theodore! I know ...
Oct 4, 2024
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Hello, Juhxi! A belated welcome to YWS! It's nice to meet you. I'm dropping by to give you a review and I will be using the YWS'mores method ! :) ...
Oct 4, 2024
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Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 2/8 [Ink-stained Maiden]
Hello again JustARedDesign! Dropping by on behalf of Team Pumpkin to give you a review. :) Starting off with some grammatical nitpicks I noticed while reading: Asterion tugged at her ...
Sep 29, 2024
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Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 1/8 [The Labyrinth]
Hello JustARedDesign! Welcome to YWS! Dropping by during this lovely Review Day to give you a review. :) Starting off with the grammatical nitpicks: When she finally found the edge ...
Sep 29, 2024
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Hello vampricone! Dropping by during the last few hours of Review Day to bring you a review! ♥ Using the YWS S'mores method, let's start with the graham cracker layer ...
Sep 29, 2024
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Hello FrozenEntropy! I'm dropping by during this lovely Review Day to give you a review, as I know you've been waiting for a while to get one. However, I have ...
Sep 29, 2024
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Hi gruzinkerbell! Happy Review Day! Her glowing, auburn fur showed brighter than a wildfire I believe you mean shone brighter? Birds’ feathers ruffled in the trees. This is just a ...
Sep 29, 2024
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Hi vampricone! Happy Review Day! Dropping by to give you some feedback. :) The only reason Elestia and Anthony were even going too far in the garden, to the part ...
Sep 29, 2024
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Hello again, vampricone! I hope you don't mind that I keep showing up in your notifications, haha! In the end, they wanted him to be better and better than he ...
Sep 23, 2024
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Hi gruzinkerbell! Dropping by to give you a review. I don't usually review poetry, because I struggle to provide adequate feedback, but since alliyah has already provided you with a ...
Sep 23, 2024
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Hi Purple67! Dropping by to give you a review. I don't normally review lyrics, or poetry in general, mostly because I feel that I cannot give good feedback on it ...
Sep 23, 2024
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Hello Stickles! Nice to meet you! Dropping by to give a review and hopefully provide you with some helpful feedback :) With all due respect, I believe that you are ...
Sep 23, 2024
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Hey vampricone6783! Dropping by again to review this for you! I have not read any of the Fazbear Frights books, but I do see my elementary school kiddos reading them ...
Sep 22, 2024
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Hi vampricone6783! Dropping by to give you a review. I admit, I have not read the book series that this fanfic is based on. At first, I actually thought you ...
Sep 22, 2024