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  • Script » General, General
    Re: Je t'aime (I love you) - 4

    Hello KaavyaK! Dropping by to give you a review using the YWS'mores Method . I have not read the other parts of this story, so I will do my best ...

    Oct 8, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Theodore - Silent apologies [Chapter 4]

    Hello again, Juhxi! Dropping by with another review, with the use of the YWS'mores Method . :) The Top Graham Layer: Oooo I am excited to meet Theodore! I know ...

    Oct 4, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Winifred - Falling in love [Chapter 3]

    Hello, Juhxi! A belated welcome to YWS! It's nice to meet you. I'm dropping by to give you a review and I will be using the YWS'mores method ! :) ...

    Oct 4, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 2/8 [Ink-stained Maiden]

    Hello again JustARedDesign! Dropping by on behalf of Team Pumpkin to give you a review. :) Starting off with some grammatical nitpicks I noticed while reading: Asterion tugged at her ...

    Sep 29, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 1/8 [The Labyrinth]

    Hello JustARedDesign! Welcome to YWS! Dropping by during this lovely Review Day to give you a review. :) Starting off with the grammatical nitpicks: When she finally found the edge ...

    Sep 29, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Siren’s Desire-Part Ten

    Hello vampricone! Dropping by during the last few hours of Review Day to bring you a review! ♥ Using the YWS S'mores method, let's start with the graham cracker layer ...

    Sep 29, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror
    Re: We, Cryptids Chapter Fourteen

    Hello FrozenEntropy! I'm dropping by during this lovely Review Day to give you a review, as I know you've been waiting for a while to get one. However, I have ...

    Sep 29, 2024

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Meadow's Aster: Chapter One: The Lepidopteran's Law

    Hi gruzinkerbell! Happy Review Day! Her glowing, auburn fur showed brighter than a wildfire I believe you mean shone brighter? Birds’ feathers ruffled in the trees. This is just a ...

    Sep 29, 2024

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Elestia’s origin: “Marcia Blythe’s dear love”

    Hi vampricone! Happy Review Day! Dropping by to give you some feedback. :) The only reason Elestia and Anthony were even going too far in the garden, to the part ...

    Sep 29, 2024

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural
    Re: The rules at home

    Hello again, vampricone! I hope you don't mind that I keep showing up in your notifications, haha! In the end, they wanted him to be better and better than he ...

    Sep 23, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual
    Re: Bathwater

    Hi gruzinkerbell! Dropping by to give you a review. I don't usually review poetry, because I struggle to provide adequate feedback, but since alliyah has already provided you with a ...

    Sep 23, 2024


  • Hi Purple67! Dropping by to give you a review. I don't normally review lyrics, or poetry in general, mostly because I feel that I cannot give good feedback on it ...

    Sep 23, 2024

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: The life Machine #2

    Hello Stickles! Nice to meet you! Dropping by to give a review and hopefully provide you with some helpful feedback :) With all due respect, I believe that you are ...

    Sep 23, 2024

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural
    Re: The death of an Angel

    Hey vampricone6783! Dropping by again to review this for you! I have not read any of the Fazbear Frights books, but I do see my elementary school kiddos reading them ...

    Sep 22, 2024

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural
    Re: Family ties run deep

    Hi vampricone6783! Dropping by to give you a review. I admit, I have not read the book series that this fanfic is based on. At first, I actually thought you ...

    Sep 22, 2024


“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.”
— Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince