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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: the most important poem of my life

    Hey there! First of all, here is a thread on how to format poetry in the Publishing Center. I know, it's a bit annoying, but there's a way, we promise! ...

    Oct 20, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Everything is beautiful!

    Hey Eros! So, this is a very cute poem! I enjoyed reading it. :) I like how lighthearted and positive it is. It had a simple, easy-to-follow flow. My only ...

    Oct 20, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Everything is beautiful!

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    Hey Eros! So, this is a very cute poem! I enjoyed reading it. :) I like how lighthearted and positive it is. It had a simple, easy-to-follow flow. My only ...

    Oct 20, 2018

  • Other » Realistic, Politics
    Re: Kai Shappley

    Hey there! So, this is a very confusing piece of writing because there is literally no context for what is going on. You start us off with a quote and ...

    Oct 20, 2018

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Crown of leaves ("inktober" poem #1)

    Hey there! First off, this is a lovely poem and I absolutely adore the imagery and personification you have included. I'm a big fan of short poems because of the ...

    Oct 11, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic
    Re: Deleted

    Hey there! Just to let you know, I haven't read any of the previous chapters to this novel, and I apologize for that. I am just going to base my ...

    Oct 11, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: del)

    Hey there! Curious to see where this is going. :) a woman spoke slow, seemingly unsure I feel that slow should be slowly and seemingly should be seeming. "A woman ...

    Oct 11, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: deleted

    Hey there! It looks like Noelle already covered a lot of the technical nitpicks, so I'm just gonna share my thoughts with you. Prologue-wise, this was pretty good. I'm not ...

    Oct 10, 2018

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: fhdfhd

    Hey there! This is such a beautiful poem you have here and I honestly loved it a lot. It's a lot different compared to the poetry I'm used to reading. ...

    Oct 10, 2018

  • Short Story » Narrative, General
    Re: Forever Silence

    Hey friend! :) I read this a few days ago and I was meaning to leave a review but I got busy, so now here I am. Let's get started. ...

    Oct 10, 2018


  • Hi there! Dropping by for a quick review. :) Okay, so this is a beautiful poem! I loved reading this and I think you did a great job with this. ...

    Apr 1, 2018

  • Other » Romantic, General
    Re: The Towers of Unknown

    Hi there! Just dropping by for a quick review :) or you could be putting in more effort. I feel like this is worded oddly when paired with the first ...

    Apr 1, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: A Merry Band of Monsters - Chapter 4

    Hi there! Just dropping by to give a quick review. :) I hope you don't mind, but I have not read any of the previous chapters, so I will be ...

    Apr 1, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 4 – Faustian Pact

    Hi there! Just dropping by for a quick review. :) I hope you don't mind, but I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so I'll be giving you a ...

    Apr 1, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Romantic
    Re: Psychic chapter six

    Hi there! Just dropping by for a quick review. :) I apologize in advance because I have not read any of the previous chapters, so I will just be basing ...

    Apr 1, 2018


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