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  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Supernatural
    Re: A smile and a laugh

    Hey vampricone! Here for the last review for June! I like how short and simple this is, it kind of gives the effect of being a children’s nursery rhyme or ...

    Jun 30, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: When You Wake Up Dead - Chapter Two

    Hello there! Icy here for a quick review this evening! I’ve not reviewed the first part of this, but I did go back and give it a quick read so ...

    Jun 29, 2024

  • Short Story » Chickens, Dramatic
    Re: Diligence

    Hey Diligence! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying the site so far. I'm popping by for a quick review today. If there's anything you don't understand about my feedback ...

    Jun 28, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 36.2

    Hi again Silv, I'm back to catch up! I'm pretty concerned by the sad face in the description but will persevere nevertheless. This is definitely more cohesive than the last ...

    Jun 27, 2024

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: A Mistake?

    In which Icy did some poems for NaPo and now feels qualified to review someone else's poetry. Eek. I really like the themes you've looked at, even in this short ...

    Jun 26, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 36.1

    Did I like this automatically before reading it? Yes. Am I concerned by the chapter description? Also yes. Uh oh. I’m in two minds about suddenly having a new character ...

    Jun 25, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 123: "The Birds"

    Am I primarily here because the description said we're observing birds? Maybe. Yes. Either way, let's get reviewing. I feel like I was more nervous for the attack by the ...

    Jun 24, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    Re: La Aldea de Po

    Hello hello! My Spanish is not nearly good enough for me to attempt this review in the language, but I can read it well enough (apologies if I misinterpret anything). ...

    Jun 24, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 122: "The Hollow"

    Hi again! Icy back for another review. I thought I was nearly caught up with these parts but it turns out I’m way further behind than I thought I was. ...

    Jun 23, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: ​8. Blood and Truce

    Hi again! Icy back for another review on another chapter! I'll get straight into it. A quick reminder first off that you need to have a new paragraph each time ...

    Jun 22, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    Re: Chapter 1

    Hey there ainslee, welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying the site so far. I'm popping by for a quick review today so let's get into it. My hands shake, ...

    Jun 21, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: 7. Rocky and cold as ice

    Hello, it's me again back for another review but on a completely different novel! I'll try not to mix up your characters but the vibe of this one is completely ...

    Jun 20, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: Siren’s Desire-Part Six

    Hello again! I don't think I've reviewed this one since maybe chapter two or three, but I'm hoping I can keep up. Before she could say a word, though, a ...

    Jun 20, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Science Fiction
    Re: ​Chapter 7 RIPped

    Hello again! I'm back for the next chapter. The biggest thing for me in this chapter was the abrupt transition from the speech to this crash landing. I understand we're ...

    Jun 20, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Science Fiction
    Re: Chapter 6. Follow Me

    Hello hello! I saw this was in the Green Room so I've popped by for a quick review. I did a super quick scan of the previous chapters to try ...

    Jun 20, 2024


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