Young Writers Society

This is such a cute little autumnal poem and it's giving me all the spooky season feels! The only thing that didn't read right to me was the second stanza: ...

Hey Gengar! I'm not purposely going to look for mistakes, so I'll just review this piece as a whole instead. Long-dead leaves crunched under her feet as Eleanor strode through ...

Ok chapter four let's go! We are indeed on a Carris chapter, so that makes the flow of this make sense. It's certainly helpful to learn more about Carris' surrounding ...

Hi hello hi I'm back again for chapter three! I'm a sucker for a dual pov story so the fact we've got Carris introduced has me excited. It's also a ...

Yay Devlin isn't dead!! I'd assumed as much, but since you killed off Frasier in chapter one you can never be too sure. I was surprised at the start that ...

Hey there Mess! I've been meaning to pop by and review the later chapters of this as there are a few in the Green Room but in honour of Review ...

I... can't believe I didn't get to this whilst it was still in the Green Room. What's happening?! I guess I'd better just get on with it, huh xD Cyrin ...

Hey Silver - can't believe Plume has beaten me to reviewing this part, I'd better catch back up so I'm all ready for new chapters! I actually started reading this ...

Hey vampricone, Icy here for a quick review! Ok I think the plot in this is certainly interesting, and the character of Alastor is easily one of the most compelling ...

Hey abditory! Icy here for a quick review on your short story. I’m typing on an iPad after a lot of travelling so hoping my comments still make sense, but ...

Hi hi hi I’m back for part two! No time for intros, let’s get reading! Mostly, I appreciated being a threat to you." Isn't he,,,a threat to everyone? I would ...

Hey Silver! It's been a minute, but I'm back to read and review another part of this story. (I also saw you posted chapter 31 and I'm scared because I ...

Hey ariah, back for another chapter. Whew, I'm all caught up once I've read and reviewed this one! The way we skip through seasons and holidays in this novel is ...

Hey there jadeactor! Icy here for a quick review this Friday :) For a first time writer, this was really well written! I'm going to kick off with a technical ...

Hey again ariah, I'm back for the next chapter! There's certainly some very Gilmore Girls vibes about the way Zeke's being treated by her family. I'm not at all surprised ...