HorsebackWriter
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Thanks for the follow.
*follows back* May I ask you the reason for following me?
HorsebackWriter I always follow anyone I write a review for if I liked their work. Thanks for the follow back.
Dec 17, 2011
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HorsebackWriter Glad I could help.
Dec 17, 2011
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Thanks a lot for commenting on my work. Your comments were very helpful. Just incase you were wondering, the character's name is mentioned in the prologue I posted before. Thanks. ^^
HorsebackWriter oh, k. I didn't see the prolouge, thanks!
Dec 5, 2011
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HorsebackWriter My pleasure.
Aug 5, 2011
Mikko Oh by the way, the narrator of the story is only 9 years old so some expressions may seem really dull and not grammatically correct. But I'm glad you liked it
Aug 5, 2011
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HorsebackWriter No problem.
Jul 19, 2011
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I agree with all your helpful comments and have made the corrections, thank you
HorsebackWriter You're welcome, I'm glad I could help.
Jul 7, 2011
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HorsebackWriter Your welcome.
Jul 6, 2011
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HorsebackWriter I know right! It feels so great to have gotten rid of that stupid case of writers block. Now I just have to find out who gave it to me.
Jul 5, 2011
HorsebackWriter So Flame what's been up with you? Did you change your Avie?
Jul 5, 2011
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Thank you! I understand entirely why it may've lacked emotion. I am merely trying to reflect one girl's bitterness over the trials of her life. Chapter four was the first really sad chapter, so you may find more emotion in the others. Anyways, thank-you once again for your review!
HorsebackWriter Your Welcome.
Jul 5, 2011
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I would like to say I'm kind of offended from your review.
Thank you for reviewing in the first place, I appreciate it! However, on some parts I don't appreciate what you said. First, before you began reading the poem I had a little description saying that wasn't the best at rhyming, I apologize if you aren't pleased with it even though, for a person that doesn't often rhyme in poetry, I like it.
Next, my wording, and to my opinion, is matched just fine together; however, I've gotten some views on the sentences but I'll fix that later. You're not my teacher, therefore all I can say is if you do not like it then do not read it, please. I'd like to ask if you didn't like my review then why did you follow me? I don't care if you do, I'm just asking. Thank you..
halogirl4197 I'm trying not to sound harsh but this is my personal opinion thank you!
May 27, 2011
HorsebackWriter I followed you because I liked it. That's just the way I am when reviewing, and I apologize if it offended you. I'm just real harsh when reviewing, but only when I really like the piece and want it too be even better so that others would like it just as much as I do. It's called tough love. I love your poem but didn't want to show it. If I ever review for you again please understand that I'm not being harsh on purpose.
May 27, 2011
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