HorsebackWriter
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HorsebackWriter Your Welcome.
Jul 5, 2011
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I need help. Please review my latest work. And to those of you who liked my book, "The Letters" I'm posting another falter two weeks from today. That should give me enough time to work all the kinks out.
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I'mmmm backkkkkkk! And hopefully I won't get another case if writers block. Again.
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Ggggoooodddd Mmmmoooorrrrnnnniiiinnnngggg!!!!
I'm on a four letter kick. Hopefully it won't appear in my writing, but if it does, you guys have my permission to kick my ass.
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Seriously, two of my older (20s) cousins just had this conversation earlier.
Jenna: I'm not the kinda girl who should be rudely barging in on your life, but damnit Crag, you are not the kind of guy who would go maryying the wrong girl.
Crag: And what, you think I should have married you? You're my cousin. And hey, at least I settled down with someone, Bob is what, your 5th boyfriend this year? Or is he your sixth?
Jenna: Hey, I'm just a girl trying to find my place in this world. And at least I'm not a cazy bitch. Your wife was the one who went out in the poaring rain in her best dress. And at lest I have the courage to speak now, unlike you!
Crag: What are you accusing ke off exactly?
Jenna: Look, Megan is naive. You were probaly the first guy on a white horse to find her, but look I can see it in your eyes, there's no love etory being written between you two. You should stop now before she finds out that you don't really love her and she writes you a dear john letter.
Crag: She is the best thing that's ever been mine jenna, and if you can't deal then....
Me: Okay, enough with the taylor swift argument.
Ranger Hawk Hahaha were they doing that on purpose?
Jun 1, 2011
HorsebackWriter Idk, when I rounded the corner Crag just to me to shut up and stay outta their buisness. Than I heard Jen say "you shouldve said no at the alter" as I walked away.
Jun 1, 2011
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Somebody has to stop me! I just posted a new first chapter of another new novel, and I haven't even finished the first two yet!
Dreamwalker Pshh, why stop you? I have, in the past four or five years, started various novels and only finished one xD. Doesn't mean I gave up on any of them. Just that, sometimes I'm inspired for topics that don't have to do with my original novel. That way I'm most productive cause theres always something to write, and theres always something I'm interested in writing about. Kills writers block completely ;D
May 31, 2011
AlmondEyes Hi, i just read your comment on my work and wanted to thank you for your input. i also wanted to tell what i meant when i said lini's eyes were the exact opposite. what i was saying was that her eyes were dark violet with silver flecks. come to think of it i probably should've just said that. -coughs- and that i might have posted the wrong draft of ch.1 (oops) i feel like an idiot. As for Maxi, he stays and thanks for saying it makes the story funny.that's what i was going for.
May 31, 2011
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Is very sad. My rabbit died from heatstroke. That's the second
Beloved pet I have lost this year. The first was my dog, Cassie. And now it was Thumper, and soon it will be Jackson (he has cancer in his paw) and Misty (She's going blind)
I guess I finally realised that I'm not the only one growing up, and everyone else around me is to. I'm really starting to be afriad of the future, and I confess I started crying this afternoon and when my Mom asked me "whats wrong honey?" I bawled out, "I wamt my childhood back!"
Yanni1995 My condolences on all your losses including your childhood but we do have to grow up some time or another... Don't worry, you'll get over it. Think of it this way at least now they're always with you wherever you go.
May 29, 2011
HorsebackWriter I know. But it still scares me that it's only three morr years till I go to college.
May 29, 2011
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Is up super early. Going to the mall with my family, my youngest sister is getting babtised tomorrow. Am ready to smash the tv so I dont have to watch and moe disney junior. All the theme songs to the shows are going to my head.
lele253isme I think nick junior is more catchier. Seriously, fresh beat band.
May 28, 2011
HorsebackWriter I know right! And now that you metion it those are in my head to. But still I've Got all these songs running in my head and I was so embarresed when I started singing to Oso song in the middle of the isle, and there was this hot boy right next to me!
May 28, 2011
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I would like to say I'm kind of offended from your review.
Thank you for reviewing in the first place, I appreciate it!
However, on some parts I don't appreciate what you said. First, before you began reading the poem I had a little description saying that wasn't the best at rhyming, I apologize if you aren't pleased with it even though, for a person that doesn't often rhyme in poetry, I like it.
Next, my wording, and to my opinion, is matched just fine together; however, I've gotten some views on the sentences but I'll fix that later. You're not my teacher, therefore all I can say is if you do not like it then do not read it, please. I'd like to ask if you didn't like my review then why did you follow me? I don't care if you do, I'm just asking. Thank you..
halogirl4197 I'm trying not to sound harsh but this is my personal opinion thank you!
May 27, 2011
HorsebackWriter I followed you because I liked it. That's just the way I am when reviewing, and I apologize if it offended you. I'm just real harsh when reviewing, but only when I really like the piece and want it too be even better so that others would like it just as much as I do. It's called tough love. I love your poem but didn't want to show it. If I ever review for you again please understand that I'm not being harsh on purpose.
May 27, 2011
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HorsebackWriter No problem.
May 27, 2011
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HorsebackWriter thanks back!
May 26, 2011
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Thanks so much for the review and the like!(:
Yeah, the entries are kinda short, but I felt like it conveyed how he wasn't really a writer. He didn't even like diaries but he did it just for her.
So, they weren't supposed to be especially long or descriptive.
But, anyway, thanks so much for your comments!(:
HorsebackWriter No problem. And now that I know that I get the story so much better, even though I still do think it would rock if it were a little longer.
May 26, 2011
fluteluvr77 I might edit it tomorrow if I have time - so I'll try and work on length too!(:
May 26, 2011
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Jul 5, 2011