HopelessAbandon
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HopelessAbandon Yeah no problem! If you have time, would you be okay with reading some of the stuff I'm working on? Any input is greatly appreciated!
Jul 5, 2013
mystogan yeah sure, just post a link on my wall and give me a comment, and I will remember to do it, most of the time I do it straight away but in rare circumstances I take some time, but I will get it done.
Jul 6, 2013
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I posted the next chapter of my novel up, please have a look at it when you have time. Operation 16 (Chapter 5)
HopelessAbandon Alright, I'll be sure to do that!
Jun 30, 2013
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Can someone please review Ink~Chapter Five? I'll return the favor! Ink ~ Chapter Five
Deanie If you really want a review it's also easy to go to the Will Review For Food forum. ^^
Jun 26, 2013
HopelessAbandon Thanks!
Jun 30, 2013
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hey thanks for your review. You right about the zooming in part, because it was a bit complicated and I should have broken it up. With terrorists, I simply just told the readers because it just wasn't a detail that I wanted to go into. If I had to describe them it would have taken a moment to do and that would have broken the tension I was trying to build up. And I would have had to reveal the villain at that point which would have ruined the end, but I get your point. Thanks again
HopelessAbandon Yeah no problem! Glad to help, and I understand where you're coming from
Jun 25, 2013
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WillowCutz Eugapae!
That's hurray in Latin!
Jun 23, 2013
HopelessAbandon
Jun 23, 2013
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Hey thanks for your support in my novel up until now. In really appreciate it. Here is the next chapter. Please have a look at it when you have time. Thanks. Operation 16 (Chapter 4)
HopelessAbandon Okay! Thanks for letting me know its up!
Jun 23, 2013
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Every time I get back on here, the amount of stuff in the green room has grown... hopefully I can help that problem out a bit... after I add something of my own to the pile of course. XD
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Hey there my next chapter is out, please have a look at it when you have time. Also please excuse the format. work.php?id=101978
HopelessAbandon I'll be sure to do that!
Jun 7, 2013
mystogan oh and the format is fine now, turns out it only sucked cause I uploaded it from internet explorer, I guess I will just have to use google chrome for Yws from now on
Jun 9, 2013
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HopelessAbandon Haha yeah, sorry its taking so long. My friends wanted to go out tonight, so I couldn't finish. I'm working on it right now though, so should be done soon.
Jun 7, 2013
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Hey thanks for the review. In future chapters I will make sure to explain things in more detail so as not to confuse people or leave them in the dark a bit
HopelessAbandon Alright cool! Excited to read more.
Jun 6, 2013
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Coming back after being gone all weekend (with no wifi D:), and finding 13 notifications, all reviews on my work or people following me, just made this day incredible! Thank you to everyone who reviewed Ink! I'll make sure to return the favor!
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Hi there, thanks for you first review. I have posted chapter 2 of Operation 16. Please take a look at it if you have time. I think you will find some of queries from the previous chapter answered already.
HopelessAbandon Alright sweet! I'll get to it when I've got a minute.
May 30, 2013
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FREE REVIEWS. SERIOUSLY. I'M GETTING A LIST GOING, SO IF YOU'VE GOT ANYTHING YOU WANT ME TO EDIT, I'M ALL YOURS, AS LONG AS YOU DON'T MIND A DAY OR TWO DELAY.
Jul 4, 2013