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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: A Humble Quest

    Hi Lim! I haven't written a review in a long time so please excuse me. I will keep this more around what I interpret from your poem and what are ...

    Sep 18, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: Prologue - the ending is a new beginning

    Hi there! For a prologue, I think this was successful in intriguing the reader to make them come back for the following chapters. You can feel the love and pain ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: A Prayer for Brothers and Sisters

    Hey Aly! I read this a few days back but didn't write any reviews as I feel I am underqualified to be a critic for such an excellent piece. But ...

    Oct 15, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Paths Crossed chapter 10

    Hi Honora! I never got a chance to leave a review for this chapter so I thought of doing one now. The descriptions in the beginning of the chapter gave ...

    Jun 13, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 9

    HI Honora! This was indeed an action packed chapter with loads of interesting moves made by Captain Lee. To be honest, I have been very much intrigued by his character ...

    Jan 22, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 8

    Hi Honora! I'm finally catching up with your latest chapter. I liked the beginning where you were trying to give a vivid image of her father's wrath that has brought ...

    Jan 13, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 7

    HI Honora! I am so glad that you are still continuing with the story. I did have to take a quick look on the previous chapters to refresh everything. I ...

    Jan 6, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Witch's Return [3]

    Hi Mage! I'm back for a quick review. I feel quite intrigued by reading about Mary and I feel her character can become very interesting in coming chapters if given ...

    Jan 1, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Witch's Return [2]

    Hey Mage! I'm back for the second Chapter. This one gives a closer view to Freddy's side of the story. At first I had this impression that she might be ...

    Dec 27, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Witch's Return [1]

    Hello Mage! I thought of swinging by your new story. I just realized that you have written a lot in the supernatural genre and I have read some of them. ...

    Dec 27, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Worth it

    Hi Chris! Here for a quick review for your poem. The emotions conveyed in the poem feels like coming after a quiet introspection done by the narrator and he's trying ...

    Dec 25, 2020

  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor
    Re: Think twice before you hit send

    Hey there! I am here for a quick review for your story. Your title caught my attention and to be honest, the first paragraph itself gave away about what was ...

    Dec 19, 2020

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Music

    Hi Grace! I'm here for a quick review. This piece feels like a simple yet very sweet one where you have beautifully expressed your love for music. Comparing it with ...

    Dec 17, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 13

    Hi Draculus! Yay, I am finally here. This one left me with lots of anticipation. I think this chapter brings a good change in mood for the readers by shifting ...

    Dec 15, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 20]

    Hi Lib! Herschel's reaction was quite surprising for him. I thought he would be really angry or maybe he'd have made some taunts on her ex for betraying him. I ...

    Dec 13, 2020


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