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Hi there! For a prologue, I think this was successful in intriguing the reader to make them come back for the following chapters. You can feel the love and pain ...

Hey Aly! I read this a few days back but didn't write any reviews as I feel I am underqualified to be a critic for such an excellent piece. But ...

Hi Honora! I never got a chance to leave a review for this chapter so I thought of doing one now. The descriptions in the beginning of the chapter gave ...

HI Honora! This was indeed an action packed chapter with loads of interesting moves made by Captain Lee. To be honest, I have been very much intrigued by his character ...

Hi Honora! I'm finally catching up with your latest chapter. I liked the beginning where you were trying to give a vivid image of her father's wrath that has brought ...

HI Honora! I am so glad that you are still continuing with the story. I did have to take a quick look on the previous chapters to refresh everything. I ...

Hi Mage! I'm back for a quick review. I feel quite intrigued by reading about Mary and I feel her character can become very interesting in coming chapters if given ...

Hey Mage! I'm back for the second Chapter. This one gives a closer view to Freddy's side of the story. At first I had this impression that she might be ...

Hello Mage! I thought of swinging by your new story. I just realized that you have written a lot in the supernatural genre and I have read some of them. ...

Hi Chris! Here for a quick review for your poem. The emotions conveyed in the poem feels like coming after a quiet introspection done by the narrator and he's trying ...

Hey there! I am here for a quick review for your story. Your title caught my attention and to be honest, the first paragraph itself gave away about what was ...

Hi Grace! I'm here for a quick review. This piece feels like a simple yet very sweet one where you have beautifully expressed your love for music. Comparing it with ...

Hi Draculus! Yay, I am finally here. This one left me with lots of anticipation. I think this chapter brings a good change in mood for the readers by shifting ...

Hi Lib! Herschel's reaction was quite surprising for him. I thought he would be really angry or maybe he'd have made some taunts on her ex for betraying him. I ...

Hi may_pathak! After reading the ending note, I feel I'm also in a need to find that way out. I can relate to your words because I think I'm also ...