Hiroyuki

Mageheart
Oct 23, 2017

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Hiroyuki
Apr 20, 2017
Mageheart, ScytheMeisterChan

Yã Minna!

So, I am writing a story, and since I want to become a frequent user I want to post the story here too!

I am writing in Portuguese, because it gets easier, but I will translate it afterwards and post it chapter by chapter here!

I want to post the description already, hope you like it!
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"They destroyed, beauty, happiness, flowering fields ... everything!
Now it's all an illusion! "

Amaya Hitomi is a 16 year old girl; But she is different.
She dreams of an ideal boy, a dream job, a happy life ... but she is shy, ashamed of herself and very insecure.
Even so, Hitomi fights against her nature and tries to rise in life, a bit at a time.
"My greatest wish? It is to detoxify this world, of course!" ^ - ^
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Amaya Hitomi is the girl in the foto.
The artist is Aoi Ogata

https://www.facebook.com/AoiOgataArtwork

Snoink Amaya is soooo pretty!

What makes her different?
Apr 20, 2017

Hiroyuki In today's world there are few girls that wants only one boyfriend, the one she wants to keep to marry, live with, make children and die with.

This world, is SO "evil" that most of the girls wants to have lots of boyfriends and such
Apr 20, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan This seems interesting; definitely a romance, I sense! I might be tempted to read. And Amaya looks so cute! (personally, though, I think she looks a little too confident for the character's personality but I'd like to see where you take this!!)
Apr 20, 2017

Hiroyuki Maybe I should make her confident?
I don't know yet. I am shy irl, so it'd be easier if she's shy...

Tell me Scythe-senpai! xD
Apr 20, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan O_O I'm a senpai? ~~eeeeek~~

Um well, I actually think shyness is a good quality to have in a character, especially a romance; personally, I think it makes the story all the more interesting. And if you're trying to base her personality with similarities to you're own, then stick with that!! It'd make the story awesome and so much easier to read.

I just think the picture looks confident, the way she's smirking and all, but of course that's not a significant matter, I was just making a judgement.

I hope to read the story no matter how it's written!
Apr 20, 2017

Hiroyuki You know senpai is just how you honor a person that is older or in a better position then you, right?

I called you that because you're here longer than I am xD

But yeah, I'll make her shy...
She is working against her shy nature so, she might get confident, maybe not? Well see
Apr 20, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan Of course ^-^

That'll be awesome; I'd love to see her character development!
Apr 20, 2017

Hiroyuki Well, I could ruin the story for you and tell you about everything hehe
Apr 20, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan Nuuuu! *covers ears* no spoilers!
Apr 20, 2017

Hiroyuki Ahahahahahahah
Apr 20, 2017

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ScytheMeisterChan
Apr 19, 2017
Hiroyuki

Hey. Welcome to YWS and thank you so much for the follow ^-^

I see you're yet another member with an anime avatar ... *follows back*

Hiroyuki Anime is just so awesome ahaha

But I don't think Kaito was in any anime, it's a vocaloid
Apr 19, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan That's kaito?! omg, oops. I thought it was Lelouch from code Geass.

Still though, vocaloid is awesome too ^_^
Apr 19, 2017

Hiroyuki Ahahahaha. Yeah, this is Kaito.

My girlfriend choose him to represent me in the internet, and Ia to represent her
Apr 19, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan Aw >.< Cute. Kaito is probably my fav, or hatsune ^-^
Apr 19, 2017

Hiroyuki I don't like Hatsune that much, gomen.
Apr 20, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan hehe. No prob, We all have our differences ^-^
Apr 20, 2017

Hiroyuki I hope to see stories or posts from you
Apr 20, 2017

ScytheMeisterChan Thank you same!!
Apr 20, 2017

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Mageheart
Apr 19, 2017

Hi and welcome to YWS! I'm Mage! If you ever have any questions, feel free to come to me! ☆

Here's some helpful parts of YWS that can help you understand how things work on the site:

Welcome Mat
Knowledge Base - YWS
FAQ
FAQ For New Users
YWS Critique Sandwich

If I can't answer your questions, or I'm not on when you have one, you can always ask the users whose names are in green (moderators) or red (administrators). Other users would be happy to help as well! ☆

What type of things do you like to write? I write fantasy novels that are sometimes also mysteries, and enjoy writing realistic fiction short stories.

Also, since this is always a fun question to ask, what is your favorite book or book series?

Hiroyuki Thank you so much, for this beautiful welcoming.

I don´t have much questions, I like to explore before creating an account xD

And about those questions, I like to write fiction ( mostly, fantasy and or teenager-like ) and I am portuguese so I am not really into english book series. But I liked a lot of the Divergent series.

Could I know your opinions? And recomendations in books?
Apr 19, 2017

Mageheart You're welcome! <3

Oh, okay! If anything pops up, you can always come to me. ^_^

That's cool! Fiction is a ton of fun. And I read Divergent before! It was definitely an interesting concept.

I love writing fantasy things. Magic is a really cool thing to write about, so I usually make sure to involve it somehow. As for my favorite book series, I really love the Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathon Stroud. I know you said that you're not really into English book series, but I just checked on the website for the series and it said that there's a Portuguese version. ^_^ So if you want something to read, I suggest checking it out!
Apr 19, 2017

Hiroyuki No, gosh, I did not made myself clear ahaha

I LOVE English. If I could change, I would become English.
I was trying to say that I don't know much English books.

I never read one, but I will definitely try to read that one in English.

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I came here to get my writting skills improved, especially in this beautiful language, so please, correct me for any error, even if it is just a coma.
I hope to make friends too and help others with ideas.

I am also trying to write a story. I am writting in portuguese, but if you think it would be a good idea to post here, I'll definitely translate to English and post it
Apr 19, 2017

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