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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Mind's Labyrinth

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! General Impression: This was a very emotional poem! It kinda wanted to make me tear up :( I hope you are doing ...

    Sep 16, 2023

  • Art » General, Other
    Re: My Hands Dress My Feet

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! General Impression: This work is very nonsensical, but that’s what makes it unique! It kind of feels like a dream that switches ...

    Sep 12, 2023

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Clothes

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! Hello… it’s me. Again General Impression: Another short & sweet poem! Is it a haiku? Sorry, I’m not good at identifying these ...

    Sep 12, 2023

  • Article / Essay » Review, General
    Re: I Dreamed of Africa

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! General Impression: I feel like we’ve all read a book that didn’t meet with our expectations—for me, this was Hour of the ...

    Sep 6, 2023

  • Article / Essay » Literature, Other
    Re: On a couch (A stream of consciousness essay)

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! General Impression: This story shows the struggle of executive dysfunction. It really does be like that sometimes What I Liked: I liked ...

    Sep 6, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Scars In Blue: Part 1- Chapter 2: Heart of Flames

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! I will be reviewing with the S’More Method today! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know: Ooh, interesting—I like how we get ...

    Sep 4, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Scars In Blue-Part 1: Chapter 1: A Rebel Is Taken

    Happy RevMo! Welcome to YWS, it’s Gengar here to leave a review! General Impression This is a captivating start to your story! It leaves a lot of unanswered questions, but ...

    Sep 3, 2023

  • Lyrics » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: Two little girls (reprise)

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! General Impression Oooh! Such a spooky story! And just in time for Spooky Season, too! It’s kinda funny how it goes from ...

    Sep 3, 2023


  • Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! (I have not read the previous chapters, but I’m going to review anyways) General Impression: This story is very neat and emotional! ...

    Sep 3, 2023

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Karina's Epitaph

    Howdy hey! Gengar here to leave a review! Yes… still reviewing your old works… sorry. Also I don’t feel like doing the template thingy lol I like this poem because ...

    Sep 2, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: I HATE POETRY!

    Howdy hey! Gengar here to leave a review! I’m sorry I keep reviewing your old work lol, but there’s just so many things I can check off the list. General ...

    Sep 2, 2023

  • Poetry » Chickens, General
    Re: Lovely Chicken

    Happy RevMo! Gengar here to leave a review! General impression: This poem is very short and sweet. Chicken poetry always has a certain charm to it, doesn’t it? Things I ...

    Sep 2, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction
    Re: Chapter 5 part 4 of 4

    Happy RevMo! It’s Gengar here to leave a review! (I have not read the other chapters, but I’m going to review anyways!) General Impression: I think this is a very ...

    Sep 2, 2023


  • Howdy hey! Gengar here to leave a review (I'm on mobile tho so rip T-T) This is probably my first exposure to prose poetry, and now I think it's very ...

    Aug 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Smoke Ghosts

    Howdy hey! Gengar (or Sonorous) here to leave a review! To me, this poem is about someone who is in love with someone else, but their love is unrequited. This ...

    Aug 16, 2023


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— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing