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Re: The Golden Rule
Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the afternoon. This was a very, interesting, story. You are very descriptive throughout the story, and I love the imagery ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: .
Flower here, and I will be your review for today. Like everyone else I read this, but did not review it simply because I could find anything to talk about. ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: Dom and Kelsey: A(kinda) Emo Love Story
Hello there, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I hope you are enjoying yourself on YWS, remember in order to get reviews you will have ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: desire?
Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for today. Do you now how hard it was to walk in a room and not touch you? This is a ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Goodbye Nick
Hello, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for today. Well… after school, I was with Nick. He leaned his head on my back as I sat between his ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: I love you
I really liked reading this, but it seemed more like poetry to me. In order for a story to be a story it must have some dialog. I think you ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Three Poems I wrote this year
Ok, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Welcome to YWS by the way, I hope you are enjoying yourself here. -Softly, he whispered an answer ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Instructions to the heart
Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for today. A heart is like a rose, i t has to be handled with care, i t cant be jerked away ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: It will all go away
Alrighty, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the day. Welcome to YWS by the way! I hope you are finding your way around easily. Also keep in ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: My baby Kronus
Alrighty, Flower here as requested! Ok, here we go. I knew he’d gone before I awoke. This line seemed awkward to me. I think you should try and reword it. ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
I was clicking around on YWS and you title caught my attention. I figured it would be just another person bashing people's beliefs, but it's not. I can feel the ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Morning Has Broken
Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. The only word I could think when I read your story was just wow. You have a very ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Flight Towards Freedom
Alright, Flower here as requested. Fear, rejection and silent screams; They seek for approval and freedom dreams. In this line shouldn't it be freedom of dreams? I think it would ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Goodbye
Ok, Flower here to review for you. I am going to be very honest with you, the poem did not flow very well at all. Also it had absolutely no ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: The Boner
I’m not saying she has a perfect figure or anything like that, but she definitely is a pretty skeleton to wake up to in the mornings. I think that you ...
Jun 15, 2010
