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Flower~Child

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Golden Rule

    Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the afternoon. This was a very, interesting, story. You are very descriptive throughout the story, and I love the imagery ...

    Jun 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .

    Flower here, and I will be your review for today. Like everyone else I read this, but did not review it simply because I could find anything to talk about. ...

    Jun 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Dom and Kelsey: A(kinda) Emo Love Story

    Hello there, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I hope you are enjoying yourself on YWS, remember in order to get reviews you will have ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: desire?

    Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for today. Do you now how hard it was to walk in a room and not touch you? This is a ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Goodbye Nick

    Hello, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for today. Well… after school, I was with Nick. He leaned his head on my back as I sat between his ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I love you

    I really liked reading this, but it seemed more like poetry to me. In order for a story to be a story it must have some dialog. I think you ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Three Poems I wrote this year

    Ok, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Welcome to YWS by the way, I hope you are enjoying yourself here. -Softly, he whispered an answer ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Instructions to the heart

    Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for today. A heart is like a rose, i t has to be handled with care, i t cant be jerked away ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: It will all go away

    Alrighty, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the day. Welcome to YWS by the way! I hope you are finding your way around easily. Also keep in ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My baby Kronus

    Alrighty, Flower here as requested! Ok, here we go. I knew he’d gone before I awoke. This line seemed awkward to me. I think you should try and reword it. ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Christians' Lie

    I was clicking around on YWS and you title caught my attention. I figured it would be just another person bashing people's beliefs, but it's not. I can feel the ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Morning Has Broken

    Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. The only word I could think when I read your story was just wow. You have a very ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Flight Towards Freedom

    Alright, Flower here as requested. Fear, rejection and silent screams; They seek for approval and freedom dreams. In this line shouldn't it be freedom of dreams? I think it would ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Goodbye

    Ok, Flower here to review for you. I am going to be very honest with you, the poem did not flow very well at all. Also it had absolutely no ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Boner

    I’m not saying she has a perfect figure or anything like that, but she definitely is a pretty skeleton to wake up to in the mornings. I think that you ...

    Jun 15, 2010


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