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Re: Blue Eyed Boy
I am really not going to give an in depth review on this, because you can see reviews on these works all over the site. It is very common to ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: I'm taking the risk
I think I would make this longer. It is so short we don't really get anything out of it. I like the description, but it is lacking a story. I ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Monsters
Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Before I begin I just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed this! The night is ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: My calm
I do not yet know you We may have spent a thousand hours together, but I do not yet know you. You pretty much said I do now know you ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: The Vampire Diaries by L.J. Smith
I just read the first book, and I loved it! Damon is my favorite character by far! The only thing I noticed that I didn't like was her repition of ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Well known dramatic books? Romance, drugs ect.
Um...were you the one reading Crank? I do believe so, but if not it and all of it's following books are good. I liked the Series of Night, it's a ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Im "Just"
I really liked this, but some of the language confused me. Also I wouldn't tell the reader you are not going to edit this, otherwise you won't get many good ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Darkness
Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening! , An absence of light, they might call. I don't know why you put a period here. If you ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: The Nature of Justice
Oh my, you never cease to amaze me Warrior Princess! I loved reading this, I can truly say I enjoyed it thoroughly! I think I need to take lessons on ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Sick and twisted dreams.
Hm, well. OK. Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Now first off don't be decieved by my name haha, I can have the demented mind ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Totally Strange (1) *edited*
Ok. Flower here and I will be your reviewer for today. (Pops fingers) It's been awhile so bear with me dear. Ok. Well the story did seem to be just ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: My Forbidden Love
Ok. Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Well, first off this is very nice to be your first poem. The first poem I wrote was ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: haiku for the shipwrecked
You are very clever my friend, very clever indeed! I don't see many haiku's I like, but I loved this one. It seems like a lot of work though, with ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Romance scene.
Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Sara tried to run, but an invisible force cemented her in place. She tried to scream, but her ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: My Falling Sun (Ch.2, pt.2)
Hello there, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the afternoon. After lunch, we followed the rocky path down to the beach. There was a drop , so ...
Jun 24, 2010
