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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Gods of Glassacre: Prologue

    Hello JustinPikachu! Incoming review! You seem to have a rich story on your hands, and due to the amount you've written, I will review as I go. Let's dive into ...

    Nov 13, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 37.1

    Heya Silver! Incoming review! Now, I'm not one of your typical reviewers for your story, nor have I gotten caught up, but I greatly enjoyed this chapter. Like a LOT. ...

    Oct 24, 2024

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Science
    Re: "before i die" - chapter one

    Hello AmberMelanie! Incoming review! You have an interesting and complex world here. I can already see how much you love it from the way you already give us all you ...

    Oct 24, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: the pain of falling in love

    Hello theromanticchemist! Incoming review! I love myself a good love poem. The unrequited passion is raw and on display. That's all I have for an overview, so let's dive right ...

    Aug 30, 2024

  • Other » Narrative, General
    Re: One Day

    Heyo Gengar, incoming review! Not gonna lie, you got me with the description, so I had to pop by with a review. I am dumbfounded by the weight of this ...

    Jan 23, 2024

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General
    Re: The sun

    Hello moby! Incoming review! The concept of your story is pretty solid. It was a pleasant read. Not much else to say with general statements, so on to the review! ...

    Jan 23, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: The Difference Between You and a Poem

    Heya Aliah! Incoming review! OOF this one hits like a truck. It's been a while since I've read a poem and physically recoiled at the reality of the emotions being ...

    Jan 11, 2024

  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy
    Re: The Woodfolk's child- Prolouge

    Hello TimelessMage! Incoming review! I loved your poem, it was full of great imagery and very creative. I've never read a poem to this caliber before. Now on to the ...

    Jan 10, 2024

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: The Bird That Made Me Bleed

    Hello CadmiumAnitmony, incoming review! I apologize, I haven't reviewed in a while, so this may be rusty. Also, my condolences, I'm sorry about your bird. I'll dive into the review ...

    Jan 10, 2024

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Antique

    Hello mustafayildiz! Incoming review! Your work was so incredibly beautiful. I love the themes of lost time coming from an elderly person. It was so grounded with a little bit ...

    Mar 31, 2023

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative
    Re: in a box under my bed

    Heya LadyBug! Incoming review! Short and simple this one is. It gives off the sad musings of the slightly painful memories you find under your bed as you put it. ...

    Mar 11, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: les écureuils sont morts

    Heya Plume! Here with a review! I adored this poem. Absolutely adored it. I like bilingual poems like this one. It works so well. It was such a sad one ...

    Mar 9, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Childhoods

    Hello foxmaster! Incoming review! This was a short, sweet, and to the point poem. Overall it was very solid. With that said, lets get on with it! I like the ...

    Mar 6, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 22

    Heya Necromancer! Incoming review! I apologize that I was never one to keep up with what story you have going on and it seems as from your description that this ...

    Mar 4, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: Ode to My Blush

    Hello there, VintageGirl! Incoming review! I like the concept of the poem as you stated in your description. An ode to an insecurity is quite profound and you made it ...

    Mar 4, 2023


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