Of course there must be something wrong / In wanting to silence any song." - R. Frost
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Hey Omni! Long time no see, I'm just meandering on through to see if I can't help get some stuff out of the Green Room. Now, I haven't read the ...
Apr 18, 2023
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Salutations, Mage! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review and help ya out so you could publish that new piece, in spite of not having read the other chapters, ...
Aug 15, 2020
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Hello there! Knight Fea here to review! I would usually speak more to plot/exposition than I will here, mostly because this piece is rather short. Still, I'd like to start ...
May 13, 2020
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Hey there! Knight Feather here to review, and hopefully drop a few helpful hints for ya~ First and foremost, I'd like to compliment you on both your description and conclusion! ...
May 13, 2020
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IT'S ME AGAIN I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND THIS NOTIF FLOOD HOLY HECC THINGS GOT EXCITING! That last action scene really gets the blood pumping, goodness gracious. It's quick-paced and ...
Apr 28, 2019
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Hell-o sound-o! Back again with another (belated) review!! So, first off, I adore your characters as always! There's some fun bits of humor and lightheartedness but also some nice spots ...
Apr 28, 2019
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Hello! This. Piece. Is. Amazing. Especially heard instead of read. Your descriptions are spot-on, the flow is smooth and engaging, and though it's short you can feel the emotion through ...
Dec 1, 2018
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OOF. That was a very intense piece! Excellent job in pulling in the reader and really bringing us through Sarah's struggles; I, for one, found it to be a very ...
Dec 1, 2018
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Hello, I'm back to read part two of your wonderful lil' tale! Your writing is beautiful, Elinor. The flow is really nice and smooth, and as with the last piece, ...
Dec 1, 2018
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Hello, Feather here to review for the first time in forever ! First of all, I'd just like to compliment you on this piece! You reveal just enough backstory in ...
Dec 1, 2018
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HELLO LOOK WHO'S BACK THAT'S RIGHT IT'S ME *bows* Things I Liked In the middle of Dega's spiel, Clandestine had slowly walked past Matt, looking like she was about to ...
Jul 5, 2018
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Hello, your birb knight Feather here to review! Things I Liked 1. The title! It's humorous, and definitely catches one's eye! 2. The first part, in the italics, was beautifully ...
Jul 2, 2018
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Hello, Feather here to review even after you spammed her like the benevolent sister she is Firstly, I like some of the similes you use when he's running! Nice description ...
Feb 27, 2018
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Hello, Fea here to review! So, firstly, I love the first paragraph! The repetition you use doesn't become boring, it just adds flavor and really shows how our main character's ...
Dec 6, 2017
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Hey, Fea's back and speaking in third-person! So first, she must say, she really likes this chapter! She can't even find too much to criticize. Fea is appreciating the lack ...
Sep 24, 2017