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Of course there must be something wrong / In wanting to silence any song." - R. Frost


  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: LMS VI: Silver and Silk 1.2

    Hey Omni! Long time no see, I'm just meandering on through to see if I can't help get some stuff out of the Green Room. Now, I haven't read the ...

    Apr 18, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 2.2]

    Salutations, Mage! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review and help ya out so you could publish that new piece, in spite of not having read the other chapters, ...

    Aug 15, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General
    Re: idk yet

    Hello there! Knight Fea here to review! I would usually speak more to plot/exposition than I will here, mostly because this piece is rather short. Still, I'd like to start ...

    May 13, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Culture
    Re: Fox Tale: Sunshower

    Hey there! Knight Feather here to review, and hopefully drop a few helpful hints for ya~ First and foremost, I'd like to compliment you on both your description and conclusion! ...

    May 13, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Lost Dragon 2.2

    IT'S ME AGAIN I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND THIS NOTIF FLOOD HOLY HECC THINGS GOT EXCITING! That last action scene really gets the blood pumping, goodness gracious. It's quick-paced and ...

    Apr 28, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Lost Dragon 2.1

    Hell-o sound-o! Back again with another (belated) review!! So, first off, I adore your characters as always! There's some fun bits of humor and lightheartedness but also some nice spots ...

    Apr 28, 2019


  • Hello! This. Piece. Is. Amazing. Especially heard instead of read. Your descriptions are spot-on, the flow is smooth and engaging, and though it's short you can feel the emotion through ...

    Dec 1, 2018

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Romantic
    Re: Hawk and Dove (3)

    OOF. That was a very intense piece! Excellent job in pulling in the reader and really bringing us through Sarah's struggles; I, for one, found it to be a very ...

    Dec 1, 2018

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Romantic
    Re: Hawk and Dove (2)

    Hello, I'm back to read part two of your wonderful lil' tale! Your writing is beautiful, Elinor. The flow is really nice and smooth, and as with the last piece, ...

    Dec 1, 2018

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Romantic
    Re: Hawk and Dove (1)

    Hello, Feather here to review for the first time in forever ! First of all, I'd just like to compliment you on this piece! You reveal just enough backstory in ...

    Dec 1, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lost Dragon 1.2

    HELLO LOOK WHO'S BACK THAT'S RIGHT IT'S ME *bows* Things I Liked In the middle of Dega's spiel, Clandestine had slowly walked past Matt, looking like she was about to ...

    Jul 5, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lost Dragon 1.1

    Hello, your birb knight Feather here to review! Things I Liked 1. The title! It's humorous, and definitely catches one's eye! 2. The first part, in the italics, was beautifully ...

    Jul 2, 2018

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: The last to escape from Caranar

    Hello, Feather here to review even after you spammed her like the benevolent sister she is Firstly, I like some of the similes you use when he's running! Nice description ...

    Feb 27, 2018

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: That Type of Story

    Hello, Fea here to review! So, firstly, I love the first paragraph! The repetition you use doesn't become boring, it just adds flavor and really shows how our main character's ...

    Dec 6, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Ordadus [2.3]

    Hey, Fea's back and speaking in third-person! So first, she must say, she really likes this chapter! She can't even find too much to criticize. Fea is appreciating the lack ...

    Sep 24, 2017


Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away.
— Carl Sandburg