EloquentDragon

Gatekeeper is one word. Also, if by "archer's window", you mean a tall, thin hole in the wall that an archer would shoot from, the proper term is "arrow slit". ...

Thanks W.P.! I reckon I'd a better set down an' get ta fixin' those thangs. (;))

Thanks for the review. To answer your question: No, the end is yet to come. Mwahha ha ha ha aha ha!!! Also, any tips on how to make it sound ...

Thankyou all, I have moved this story to the Fantasy Forum, and have added a new section under "Fantasy Novels," if anyone is interested.

Well done on the revise! The POV narration still needs a bit more polishing. For instance, this particular sentence, "But you humans are forgetful," Seemed as though the gnome were ...

Thank you CC! I now feel somewhat like a hypocrite, as I told Baywolf not to use "iota" and here I am using "cadence!" But it was good for you ...

Note to self: If you want people to review your work, don't comment on it.

A word of advice: If you want people to review your work, review other people's work. This is the idea that YWS is grounded on. When you review someone elses ...

Okay, so that may seem like a lot, but it isn't really. :) I've seen much, much, much worse. And that is being generous. As it is, I have a ...

the only thing I found just a little blah was the whole dialoge, "Hey, I guess she's asleep, we'll leave the letter with her." I concur, not to seem abrasive, ...

Yes, I know, its against the rules to post your story like that in the text, but I hate exhuastive manuels, though the instructions given on this site are hardly ...

They said I was a mistake, a failure. A glitch in the company’s long running perfection. They ignored me; they treated me like sand. An “inanimate” object, said they. A ...