EloquentDragon

Well, obviously, I am a Spiderman fan. Although I like his later, college age angst stuff then the original high school days. Anyway... First of all, even though you say ...

ED here to review! First off, you've got a great idea here. It works well as a short, and you keep things at a fast pace. Hard to do, since ...

ED here to review. First off, this was great. You've got a great idea here, and you've kept things concise and easy to read through. There's a natural smoothness to ...

Well, I did skim through your last section, but I'm here to review this section. Heh. First of all, this is excellent! The prose flows smoothly, you've got a great ...

This is for the five prompt contest, right? Anyway, I really liked how you started this off. It's short. It flows nicely. A couple of tips: This here: Lana thought. ...

ED here to review. First off, this isn't confusing at all. It flows quite nicely, the prose is smooth. It makes perfect sense to me. But there is one thing ...

ED here to review. Grammar-nazi comments in the spoilers below: It is more precious than my favourite soft toy, the white rabbit with grey paws and deep pearly black eyes. ...

So, I don't know if this is cheating or not, but since this is the revised version, here is a revised review. First off, you've got some great improvements here. ...

ED here to review, First of all, just let me say this beforehand: I don’t do romance. Romance and me have a rather… rocky relationship. So, you did a great ...

Chapter 1: Blacktie. ED here to review, as per request---well, sort of. First of all, I’m just going to say that I found this piece amusing. I don’t know if ...

ED here to review First off, you have an interesting premise here. Something that will grab the reader and get them interested right away. That being said, you can’t really ...

ED here to review A note on your prologue: This isn’t a prologue, this is a summary. Something you might find on the back jacket of your book. While it ...

Well, this isn’t a review proper, but I can’t help myself. I am one of those people who love linguistics, and as such, can’t simply leave this hanging. Sorry that ...

*Suspiciously eyes the popularity of HomeschooledTeen, clicks on HomeschooledTeen’s work, proceeds to review the work…* ED here, apparently here to review a fellow homeschooler’s work. First of

Well, hello again. This caught my attention since we’re studying medieval literature this year, so even though it's recieved quite a few comments, I'll review it anyway. With that being ...