EloquentDragon

ED here to review First of all, I liked this. A lot. I want to read the rest of it sometime---so if you need more reviews on this just PM ...

Ah, I’m back. It appears as though I’m reading these in the completely wrong order, but that’s okay. Just nitpicks this time, mostly: "Dylan has been talking to Winchester," Dane ...

ED here to review (Yes, welcome to YWS by the way, hope you find it a great stay) Firstly-you did well capturing the emotions of the main character, mostly about ...

So, this piece flowed quite nicely, I don't have anything to complain about---it's a bit short for a chapter though. Honestly, I didn't find much wrong with this. It wasn't ...

Hey there! Haven’t seen you around in a while. Hmmm, this story does seem familiar though… did you do a re-do of your NaNo this March? Anyways… First off, you ...

Well, since Nether reviewed the grammar, I’ll try and stick to the writing itself. I don’t do reviews on poetry generally, but I’ve seen DtB and figured I might as ...

I don't usually review poetry but I saw this and was lie "Ooh, a haiku!" Anyways, this was nice. I like the imagery of the "defiant grass" The only line ...

Thome---what a great name, Thome, Thome, Thome… (sorry, it’s late) First of all, this is good. I love the “flowing description.” Two things bugged me---the sweat on his arm (I ...

Wow, that was amazing. This isn’t as much of a review as it is a ranting post of praise, but I’ll try my best… The first thing I noticed was ...

Hey there, ED here to review So as I understand it, this was written by more than one author? Cool. One thing I MUST say… you absolutely cannot decide whether ...

Well, I saw “historical” and couldn’t resist. While I didn’t read the first chapter, I can pretty much grasp what is going on, so no worries there. This is great. ...

Hey mutant! ED here to review. First off, this is very short. Try and get your ideas worked out a bit more, more concrete, before submitting. (Hey, it costs after ...

ED here again, Oh wait, this chapter again? ;) First of all, this is a much, much better place to start your story than .1. The first version (or part ...

ED here to review! Hey, this isn’t too long---at least not for me. You probably could have posted them as one and it would have been fine. But then… I ...

Well, I’m here to review, mostly to return the favor. (However, I must say, you needed an M there, not just L and V, and this should probably be 18+) ...