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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Elders of the Stars

    Awesome I'll be sure to check that out :) thanks for letting me know.

    Jan 13, 2024

  • Other » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Chased by wolves

    Hi SaraJMaasRules I really like this paragraph from your story and I'm really intrigued to read the actual story that goes with it. I was wondering if you wouldn't mind ...

    Nov 2, 2023

  • Poetry » Chickens, General
    Re: The Gentle Creatures

    Hey just realised this didn't go through as a review, there is a button above the blue submit sign next time remember to press that, the button should say yes ...

    Sep 25, 2023

  • Poetry » Chickens, General
    Re: The Gentle Creatures

    Thanks so much for the review! it was very helpful and I'm glad you like the poem, also trust me your first review was way better then my first. :D ...

    Sep 25, 2023

  • Poetry » Chickens, General
    Re: The Gentle Creatures

    Thanks so much for the review I always like hearing what everyone has to say about it. :) I'm glad you liked it and will totally take all this into ...

    Sep 23, 2023

  • Poetry » Chickens, General
    Re: The Gentle Creatures

    Thanks so much again for the review I really enjoy reading them :) I'm glad you like it, and I'll be sure to fix the gramma error! thanks again!

    Sep 23, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: My Final Goodbye

    Hi thanks so much for the review it is very much appreciated, I must say I don't really know where I got my writing style from, it might just be ...

    Sep 23, 2023

  • Poetry » Chickens, General
    Re: The Gentle Creatures

    Thanks so much for the review I'm glad that you like the poem, I'll definitely go and fix all that!!

    Sep 22, 2023

  • Poetry » Chickens, General
    Re: The Gentle Creatures

    Thanks Rose I'll differently go fix those things when I get the time :) thanks again for the review I'm glad that you enjoyed it!!

    Sep 22, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: My Final Goodbye

    Thanks so much for the review it is very helpful and I will differently take it all in, I must say this wasn't one of my best poems for I ...

    Sep 15, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: My Final Goodbye

    Thanks so much for the review I always love you reviews on my poetry there always helpful. I must say this is sort of a poem about how a feel ...

    Sep 15, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: My Final Goodbye

    Thanks so much for the review, I definitely know that this wasn't one of my best poems, but it was the first time I have written since I've had writers ...

    Sep 12, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: PftPP Chapter 2.1

    Sure thing I'm always happy to help, I look forward to the up coming chapters.

    Jul 11, 2023

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: One Last Game

    I'm so glad to here that it helped, thank you for explaining what you thought of the review, it helps me to improve how I do it in the future. ...

    Jul 11, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic
    Re: You Were Once There - Chapter One

    I'm really glad that I could help! Lol it's okay I could still read it just fine.

    Jul 10, 2023


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart